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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. v. 7
Undeniably, the practical know-how is the need of the hour in this technological era. Some argue that, right from the early days of schooling till graduation, maximum efforts are being made in grasping theoretical knowledge. However, others believe that the education system is paying more attention in honing the practical skills. I completely agree with the latter opinion. My viewpoint will be further reinforced by some concrete explanations coupled with relevant examples. To commence with, now-a-days, the hiring companies are looking for tailor-made students who already have some hands-on experience with recent technology or related tools. In this way, their expense for training the freshers is reduced many-fold. Therefore, teachers in schools as well as the professors in different universities have shifted their focus from inculcating facts to actually performing the experiments in their laboratories. For instance, almost all food technology institutes have incorporated practical classes related to their courses such as Bakery science. Furthermore, until and unless, one does not put his/her theoretical knowledge into practice, he/she will never get that confidence in professional life. It is due to this fact, medical colleges invariably include actual operation of the patients as a part of their curriculum. Nevertheless, it is not a new practice. Since ancient times, the students of Ayurveda were taught how to prepare herbal solutions and apply these in real life situations. On the contrary, few people think that most of the time and efforts are being devoted to fill the minds of students with a lot of information and the practical aspects of learning is given the least importance. The principal reason they attribute is, the lack of sufficient infrastructure facilities. To summarise, I would like to state that, right from the ancient period till today, there is a right balance between teaching theory as well as practical subjects, from the tender age of any student till he/she becomes mature.
Undeniably
, the
practical
know-how is the need of the hour in this technological era.
Some
argue that, right from the early days of schooling till graduation, maximum efforts are
being made
in grasping theoretical knowledge.
However
, others believe that the education system is paying more attention in honing the
practical
skills
. I completely
agree
with the latter opinion. My viewpoint will be
further
reinforced by
some
concrete explanations coupled with relevant examples.

To commence with,
now
-a-days, the hiring
companies
are looking for tailor-made
students
who already have
some
hands-on experience with recent technology or related tools. In this way, their expense for training the freshers is
reduced
many
-fold.
Therefore
, teachers in schools
as well
as the professors in
different
universities have shifted their focus from inculcating facts to actually performing the experiments in their laboratories.
For instance
, almost all food technology institutes have incorporated
practical
classes related to their courses such as Bakery science.

Furthermore
, until and unless, one does not put his/her theoretical knowledge into practice, he/she will never
get
that confidence in professional life. It is due to this fact, medical colleges
invariably
include actual operation of the patients as a part of their curriculum.
Nevertheless
, it is not a new practice. Since ancient times, the
students
of Ayurveda
were taught
how to prepare herbal solutions and apply these in real life situations.

On the contrary
, few
people
think
that most of the time and efforts are
being devoted
to
fill the minds of
students
with
a lot of
information and the
practical
aspects of learning is
given
the least importance. The principal reason they attribute is, the lack of sufficient infrastructure facilities.

To
summarise
, I would like to state that, right from the ancient period till
today
, there is a right balance between teaching theory
as well
as
practical
subjects, from the tender age of any
student
till he/she becomes mature.
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IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills.

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