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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree? v.3

Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. v. 3
It is argued that schools and universities are focusing more on teaching theoretical facts rather than practical skills. This statement could be partially true to some extent, however teaching the basic concepts and facts are necessary for students to learn the practical skills. Therefore, I disagree with this conviction and will support my view in this essay. Firstly, schools and universities are ought to teach theoretical facts as an essential component of their academic criteria. That is to say, students gain the fundamental understanding of concepts and ideas of the studied subject such that leads to learning the practical skills as well. In other words, deep understanding of the basics are the foundation for learning the practical skills. So, although more time is spent for learning the basics, it ultimately serves for learning the practical skills. Secondly, schools and universities nowadays are aware of the relative importance for providing students with practical knowledge and skills relevant to the workforce. Science majors, for instance, are including a training component in all taught classes where students are encouraged to apply the concepts they learned in a real life situation and develop their own ideas. By looking at the curriculum of most universities, one can see that at least 50% of the offered classes are focusing on mixing hypothesis with application and developing practical skills. To conclude, spending more time learning the basic concepts and fundamentals is necessary for learning the practical skills. Therefore, both skills are correlated and are treated as such in the universities’ catalog.
It
is argued
that schools and
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universities
are focusing more on teaching theoretical facts
rather
than
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practical
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skills
. This statement could be
partially
true to
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some
extent,
however
teaching the
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basic
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concepts
and facts are necessary for
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students
to learn the
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practical
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skills
.
Therefore
, I disagree with this conviction and will support my view in this essay.

Firstly
, schools and
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universities
are ought to teach theoretical facts as an essential component of their academic criteria.
That is
to say,
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students
gain the fundamental understanding of
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concepts
and
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ideas
of the studied subject such that leads to
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learning
the
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practical
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skills
as well
.
In other words
, deep understanding of the basics are the foundation for
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learning
the
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practical
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skills
.
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So
, although more time
is spent
for
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learning
the basics, it
ultimately
serves for
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learning
the
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practical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

Secondly
, schools and
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universities
nowadays are aware of the relative importance for providing
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students
with
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practical
knowledge and
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skills
relevant to the workforce. Science majors,
for instance
, are including a training component in all taught classes where
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students
are encouraged
to apply the
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concepts
they learned in a real life situation and develop their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
. By looking at the curriculum of most
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universities
, one can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that at least 50% of the offered classes are focusing on mixing hypothesis with application and developing
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practical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.

To conclude
, spending more time
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learning
the
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basic
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concepts
and fundamentals is necessary for
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learning
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
practical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
skills
.
Therefore
, both
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skills
are correlated
and
are treated
as such in the
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universities’
catalog.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
254 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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