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Some people say that health care and education should be the responsibility of the government but others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals themselves. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.5

Nowadays, health care and education have become the focus of the people's concern. It is a highly debated issue as to who should pay for these services. There are those who argue that the government should pay for them while others think the costs should be shouldered by individuals. Personally, I think that basic healthcare and primary education should be on the government but advanced health care and higher education should be borne by the individual. It is irrefutable that it is the government's responsibility to make basic health care and primary education accessible to everyone. The reason is that a nation's prosperity very much depends on the contribution made by its well- educated citizens who are in good health. After all we all pay taxes and so we are entitled to get something back in return. Private schools and private hospitals can be available for those who want and can afford it but the free schools and free government hospitals should always be there. On the other hand, individuals should be responsible for their advanced health care. Actually, the advanced medical and surgical treatments are very expensive. So, instead of depending on government we should take some health insurance or save in any other way with the tomorrow in mind. Higher education, too, benefits the individual more than the nation. So it is quite reasonable to pay for it from one's pocket. There are, of course, some sections of society who cannot afford their own healthcare. The government should have some system of knowing their financial status and provide free healthcare so that nobody dies for want of treatment. As far as higher education is concerned, the government can have some system of interest free loans for the needy and meritorious students. To sum up, basic education and primary education should be borne by the government but advanced health care and education should be paid by the individual from his pocket.
Nowadays,
health
care
and
education
have become the focus of the
people
's concern. It is a
highly
debated issue as to
who
should
pay
for these services. There are those
who
argue that the
government
should
pay
for them while others
think
the costs should
be shouldered
by
individuals
.
Personally
, I
think
that basic healthcare and primary
education
should be on the
government
but
advanced
health
care
and higher
education
should
be borne
by the individual.

It is irrefutable that it is the
government
's responsibility to
make
basic
health
care
and primary
education
accessible to everyone. The reason is that a nation's prosperity
very
much depends on the contribution made by its well- educated citizens
who
are in
good
health
.
After all
we all
pay
taxes and
so
we
are entitled
to
get
something back in return. Private schools and private hospitals can be available for those
who
want and can afford it
but
the
free
schools and
free
government
hospitals should always be there.

On the other hand
,
individuals
should be responsible for their
advanced
health
care
. Actually, the
advanced
medical and surgical treatments are
very
expensive.
So
,
instead
of depending on
government
we should take
some
health
insurance or save in any other way with the tomorrow in mind. Higher
education
, too, benefits the
individual
more than the nation.
So
it is quite reasonable to
pay
for it from one's pocket.

There are,
of course
,
some
sections of society
who
cannot afford their
own
healthcare. The
government
should have
some
system of knowing their financial status and provide
free
healthcare
so
that nobody
dies
for want of treatment. As far as higher
education
is concerned
, the
government
can have
some
system of interest
free
loans for the needy and meritorious students.

To sum up, basic
education
and primary
education
should
be borne
by the
government
but
advanced
health
care
and
education
should
be paid
by the
individual
from his pocket.
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IELTS essay Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but other people claim that it is the individual's responsibility.

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