Some people say that government should not put money on building theatres and sport stadium. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? v.1
Some people say that government should not put money on building theatres and sport stadium. They should spend more money on medical care and education. v. 1
It is often argued that governments should invest more funds for building hospitals and schools rather than spending money on creating facilities for sports and art. In my opinion, both are vital aspects of human development, and equal budget should be allocated to them.
To begin with, It is irrefutable that education and medical care are first and foremost things authorities should provide to the people. In other words, health care is a basic amenity that should be provided to everyone because many people cannot afford it. Similarly, education is a must for the prosperity of a nation. Thus, by investing money on building new colleges or universities, bureaucrats can easily promote awareness and motivate the young generation towards it.
On contrary, art and sports drives culture, fitness, and health of the people. Firstly, cinema enhances integrity of a nation as it brings people together. Secondly, by building new sports stadiums, government can increase interest of people in sports. A research done by the students of the University of Michigan revealed that sporting culture keeps people away from smoking and taking drugs. So people who argue that spending money on building theatres and sports stadium is a waste, are being selfish, and are ignoring pivotal aspects of its impact on social development of a country.
In conclusion, government should put money on all of them, be it education, medical care, building theatres, and new sports stadiums because they all contributes in economic and social development of the nation.
It is
often
argued that
governments
should invest more funds for
building
hospitals and schools
rather
than spending
money
on creating facilities for
sports
and art. In my opinion, both are vital aspects of human development, and equal budget should
be allocated
to them.
To
begin
with, It is irrefutable that education and medical care are
first
and foremost things authorities should provide to the
people
.
In other words
, health care is a basic amenity that should
be provided
to everyone
because
many
people
cannot afford it.
Similarly
, education is a
must
for the prosperity of a nation.
Thus
, by investing
money
on
building
new colleges or universities, bureaucrats can
easily
promote awareness and motivate the young generation towards it.
On contrary, art and
sports
drives culture, fitness, and health of the
people
.
Firstly
, cinema enhances integrity of a nation as it brings
people
together.
Secondly
, by
building
new
sports
stadiums,
government
can increase interest of
people
in
sports
. A research done by the students of the University of Michigan revealed that sporting culture
keeps
people
away from smoking and taking drugs.
So
people
who argue that spending
money
on
building
theatres
and
sports
stadium is a waste, are being selfish, and are ignoring pivotal aspects of its impact on social development of a country.
In conclusion
,
government
should put
money
on all of them, be it education, medical care,
building
theatres
, and new
sports
stadiums
because
they all
contributes
in economic and social development of the nation.
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