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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some people say that educational success depends mostly on a good teacher. Others say it depends on the attitude of the student. v. 2
According to some people, the academic success of a student is determined by the teaching skills and dedication of their teachers; others insist that a student’s attitude towards learning is the key factor that determines whether he will be successful or not. Both views will be discussed in this essay. On the one hand, it is impossible to write off the contribution of a teacher in the learning process. Teachers impart knowledge. They clear doubts and guide students every step of the way. Talented and dedicated teachers motivate their students to work hard and help them achieve better grades. Teachers are like second parents and they know the strengths and weaknesses of their students and device teaching strategies appropriate for each one of them. On the other hand, a student must have a strong desire to learn and improve if they are to get good grades. No matter how good the teacher is, if the student lacks the desire to learn nothing can help them. That also explains why every class has some students who never get even the passing marks. The same class will also students who scored an A plus grade in each subject. All of them are taught by the same teachers but their scores vary simply because their attitude towards learning is also different. Some students have a strong desire to learn. They will work hard regardless of whether the teacher is good or not. Actually, they will work harder if the teacher is bad. Also, in this day and age when classes are readily available on the internet, no student can blame teachers for their poor grades. In conclusion, the teacher certainly has a role to play in the educational success of the student; however, the role of the teacher is not more important than the attitude of the student towards learning. A student determined to achieve success will achieve it regardless of whether the teacher is good or bad.
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some
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people
, the academic success of a
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student
is determined
by the teaching
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skills
and dedication of their
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teachers
; others insist that a
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student’s
attitude towards
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learning
is the key factor that determines whether he will be successful or not. Both views will
be discussed
in this essay.

On the one hand, it is impossible to write off the contribution of a
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teacher
in the
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learning
process.
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Teachers
impart knowledge. They
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clear
doubts and guide
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students
every step of the way. Talented and dedicated
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teachers
motivate their
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students
to work
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hard
and
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help
them achieve better grades.
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Teachers
are like second
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parents and
they know the strengths and weaknesses of their
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students
and device teaching strategies appropriate for each one of them.

On the other hand
, a
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student
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must
have a strong desire to learn and
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improve
if they are to
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get
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good
grades. No matter how
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good
the
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teacher
is, if the
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student
lacks the desire to learn nothing can
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help
them. That
also
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explains
why every
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class
has
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some
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students
who never
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get
even the passing marks. The same
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class
will
also
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students
who scored an A plus grade in each subject. All of them
are taught
by the same
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teachers
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but
their scores vary
simply
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because
their attitude towards
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learning
is
also
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different
.
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Some
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students
have a strong desire to learn. They will work
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hard
regardless of whether the
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teacher
is
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good
or not. Actually, they will work harder if the
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teacher
is
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bad
.
Also
, in this day and age when classes are
readily
available on the internet, no
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student
can blame
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teachers
for their poor grades.

In conclusion
, the
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teacher
certainly
has a role to play in the educational success of the
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student
;
however
, the role of the
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teacher
is not more
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important
than the attitude of the
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student
towards
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learning
. A
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student
determined to achieve success will achieve it regardless of whether the
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teacher
is
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good
or
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bad
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher; others think that it depends on the attitude of the students.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
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