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Some people say that E- book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Some people say that E- book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 2
It is true that modern technology will change anything through anyone have using electronic material in whole life. The root can that sometimes offspring do read on E-book. There is strong opinion ritual newspaper and magazines should not replace in the worldwide. I am not agree with this assertion. There are manifold reasons behind for this. This essay would throw some light an all aspects to see things in the right perspective. The seeds to the issue that multiheads. There most predominant some dweller consider that modern world of the modern technology have changed local newspapers and funny magazines in our nationdsTherefore, today youngster especially use online website. For instance, YouTube, Twitter, Snapchat, Instagram and so on. After that, it is unquestionably true that in few days education plays a vital role in human being life as well as some person do job in their life that ' s why they must study online sites. Hences, they most read E-book that' s that youth almost should using technology gadgets like cell phone, laptop, tablet, computer and extra. Moving on the newspaper all in all magazines. There is no denying that fact the, some people think that a couple of years newspaper always give a lot of information to every one. Otherwise, newspaper and magazines always give fresh news relate to all issues. For examples, industry line, law, government, political, officer. Last but not the least, according to me, newspaper is the best source to upsurge knowledge day by day. All saisaand down, I reckon on one hand it is no doubt newspaper is worldwide than magazines usually give fresh news. From the other side, technology is basic part of life as far as most of juvenile can read articles for E read book. Thus, they will help for study than adolescent often use technology devices.
It is true that modern
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technology
will
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change
anything through anyone
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have
using electronic material in whole
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life
. The root can that
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sometimes
offspring do
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read
on E-book. There is strong opinion ritual
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newspaper
and
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magazines
should not replace in the worldwide. I am not
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agree
with this assertion. There are
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manifold


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reasons
behind for this. This essay would throw
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some
light an all
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aspects
to
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see
things
The usual preposition for "perspective" is "from" not "in." "from the right perspective".
in the right perspective
.

The seeds to the issue that
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multiheads
. There most predominant
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some
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dweller
consider that modern world of the modern
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technology
have
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changed
local
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newspapers
and
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funny
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magazines
in our
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nationdsTherefore
,
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today
youngster
especially
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use
online website.
For instance
, YouTube, Twitter, Snapchat, Instagram and
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so
on. After that, it is
unquestionably
true that in few
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days
education plays a vital role in human being
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life
as well
as
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some
Did you mean "people", "persons"?
person
do job in their
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life
that ' s why they
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must
study online sites.
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Hences
, they most
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read
E-book
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that&
#039; s that youth almost should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "use"
using
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technology
gadgets like cell phone, laptop, tablet,

computer and extra.

Moving on the
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newspaper
all in all
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magazines
. There is no denying that fact
Did you forget something after 'the'?
the,
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some
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people
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think
that a couple of years
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newspaper
always give
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a lot of
information to every one.
Otherwise
,

newspaper and
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magazines
always give fresh news relate to all issues. For examples, industry line, law,
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government
, political, officer. Last
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but
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not


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the
least, according to me,
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newspaper
is the best source to upsurge knowledge day by day.

All
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saisaand
down, I reckon on one hand it is no doubt
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newspaper
is
Use "(worldwide)" to make a comparison with this adjective.
worldwide
than
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magazines
usually
give fresh news. From the other side,
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technology
is basic part of
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life
as far as
Consider using "most juvenile" or "most of the juvenile".
most of juvenile
can
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read
articles for E
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read
book.
Thus
, they will
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help
for study than adolescent
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often
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use
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technology
devices.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
24Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people say that E- book and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines v. 2

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
305 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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