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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v.3

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v. 3
All humans are different but some behaviours are common. There are some individuals who prefer keeping their surroundings neat with everything in place. On contrary, others don't bother much about whether the place around them is dirty and things scattered. In my opinion, it is extremely necessary for your belongings to be kept in an orderly manner and the place tidy. This essay shall discuss why cleaniless is essential. Firstly, if we arrange everything in order it will save the time and hussle of finding things when needed. We can utilise this time in completing our work assignments earlier or for relaxing. For example, if we have created segments for all our work related files and organized them there in alphabetical order, searching for legal agreements will mean we just go to the legal section and see files starting with the letter A. Hence with minimal effort we get what we want. Futhermore, a tidy place is a healthy place. With books or clothes scattered all over, eatables left out in the open it serves as a breeding ground for pests and insects. For instance, if biscuit crumbs and empty chup of tea is left over, it is highly likely to find cockroaches in the place. They can be reasons for spread of diseases. In conclusion, I would reinstate that a neat place is not only more convenient to live in, but also healthier. This essay stated reasons why we should keep our things in order and the room neat.
All humans are
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different
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but
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some
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behaviours
are common. There are
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some
individuals who prefer keeping their surroundings neat with everything in
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place
. On contrary, others don't bother much about whether the
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place
around them is dirty and things scattered. In my opinion, it is
extremely
necessary for your belongings to be
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kept
Consider replacing "in an orderly manner" with the adverb for "orderly"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an orderly manner
and the
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place
tidy. This essay shall discuss why
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cleaniless
is essential.

Firstly
, if we arrange everything in order it will save the time and
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hussle
of finding things when needed. We can
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utilise
this time in completing our work assignments earlier or for relaxing.
For example
, if we have created segments for all our work related files and organized them there in alphabetical order, searching for legal agreements will mean we
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just
go to the legal section and
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see
files starting with the letter A.
Hence
with minimal effort we
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get
what we want.

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Futhermore
, a tidy
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place
is a healthy
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place
. With books or clothes scattered all over, eatables
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left
out in the open it serves as a breeding ground for pests and insects.
For instance
, if biscuit crumbs and empty
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chup
of tea is
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left
over, it is
highly
likely to find cockroaches in the
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place
. They can be reasons for spread of diseases.

In conclusion
, I would reinstate that a neat
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place
is not
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only
more convenient to
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live
in,
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but
also
healthier. This essay stated reasons why we should
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keep
our things in order and the room neat.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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