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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v.11

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v. 11
It is widely argued that arranging everything properly in the right place in houses and work areas is a crucial step. In my opinion, items that we use occasionally can be kept in the right place. However, the things which we use often should be kept in an easily accessible place. This essay discusses on both the views. On the one hand, placing the items in the right place can save time. If we misplace an item, we will end up spending most of our time searching it. Due to this reason, we feel frustrated and regretful that if I had placed the box in the correct place, I would have found it by now. Besides, having an organised work area provides us a peaceful state of mind rather than a messy table which makes us annoyed. For example, when we have an unorganised work area with everything scattered around, it can curb our concentration. On the other hand, keeping the items, which we use often in the area that is easily accessible can be beneficial. Since reading books is one of the most common hobby among people, keeping books in a spot where we can take them easily helps us in completing the book. To elucidate, a survey conducted by a famous YouTube star shows that about 75% of the people place the books on their table or anywhere it is easy for them to access. One other point worth considering is that it makes our lives more comfortable, when we are able to obtain it easily. Television remotes are extremely a useful product and usually keeping it on the sofa, instead of keeping it near the television facilitates us in watching the programmes, while resting on the sofa. In conclusion, not everything ought to be kept in the proper spot. In my opinion, placing the things that are used often in a place which is easy to access makes our lives relaxed. Nonetheless, organising our workplace can provide us a calm atmosphere to carry our task without any distractions.
It is
widely
argued that arranging everything
properly
in the right
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place
in
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houses
and work
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areas
is a crucial step. In my opinion,
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items
that we
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use
occasionally
can be
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kept
in the right
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place
.
However
, the things which we
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use
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often
should be
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kept
in an
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easily
accessible
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place
. This essay discusses on both the views.

On the one hand, placing the
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items
in the right
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place
can save time. If we misplace an
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item
, we will
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end
up spending most of our time searching it. Due to this reason, we feel frustrated and regretful that if I had placed the box in the correct
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place
, I would have found it by
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now
.
Besides
, having an
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organised
work
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area
provides us a peaceful state of mind
rather
than a messy table which
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makes
us annoyed.
For example
, when we have an
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unorganised
work
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area
with everything scattered around, it can curb our concentration.

On the other hand
, keeping the
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items
, which we
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use
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often
in the
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area
that is
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easily
accessible can be beneficial. Since reading
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books
is one of the most common hobby among
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people
, keeping
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books
in a spot where we can take them
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easily
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helps
us in completing the
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book
. To elucidate, a survey conducted by a
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famous
YouTube star
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shows
that about 75% of the
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people
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place
the
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books
on their table or anywhere it is easy for them to access. One other point worth considering is that it
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makes
our
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lives
more comfortable, when we are able to obtain it
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easily
. Television remotes are
extremely
a useful product and
usually
keeping it on the sofa,
instead
of keeping it near the television facilitates us in watching the
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programmes
, while resting on the sofa.

In conclusion
, not everything ought to be
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kept
in the proper spot. In my opinion, placing the things that are
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used
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often
in a
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place
which is easy to access
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makes
our
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lives
relaxed. Nonetheless,
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organising
our workplace can provide us a calm atmosphere to carry our task without any distractions.
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IELTS essay Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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