Some individual states that global games events are advantageous for community peace. This essay agrees that global games events play a vital role for world peace. Firstly, this essay will discuss the sense of brotherhood and exchange of tradition among the worldwide people and secondly, it will discuss the nepotism of games authority to create new country order frequently for international events.
Global games give thrive to brotherhood along with exchange of tradition all over the world. People of different communities gather in one place, play together, stay together, which develop a sense of brotherhood among them and obviously when people of different countries meet they share their traditions with each other. For Example, in Olympics games which are started from 2014, player from all over the world gather in the same place to show brotherhood and an exchange of traditions.
However, International games authority should be very care full while organizing event as they always try to organize the event in different countries because if the event will always hold in the same country than this might be the injustice for other countries player. Every nation should get the chance to host the event this will support their players and country in both ways financially and sportsman spirit. For example, since 2008 Champions Trophy series of cricket is always held in India no matter which country team is winning and this leads other country player with a sense of injustice.
In conclusion essay agrees that global games events are helpful for peace; provide friendship between player and countries, interchange traditions and bias of global games authority for building new event order with a regular interval of time.
Some
individual states that
global
games
events
are advantageous for community peace. This essay
agrees
that
global
games
events
play a vital role for world peace.
Firstly
, this essay will discuss the sense of
brotherhood
and exchange of
tradition
among the worldwide
people
and
secondly
, it will discuss the nepotism of
games
authority to create new
country
order
frequently
for international
events
.
Global
games
give thrive to
brotherhood
along with exchange of
tradition
all over the world.
People
of
different
communities gather in one place, play together, stay together, which develop a sense of
brotherhood
among them and
obviously
when
people
of
different
countries
meet
they share their
traditions
with each other.
For Example
, in Olympics
games
which are
started
from 2014,
player
from all over the world gather in the same place to
show
brotherhood
and an exchange of traditions.
However
, International
games
authority should be
very
care full while organizing
event
as they always try to organize the
event
in
different
countries
because
if the
event
will always hold in the same
country
than
this might be the injustice for other
countries
player
. Every nation should
get
the chance to host the
event
this will support their
players
and
country
in both ways
financially
and sportsman spirit.
For example
, since 2008 Champions Trophy series of cricket is always held in India no matter which
country
team is winning and this leads other
country
player
with a sense of injustice.
In conclusion
essay
agrees
that
global
games
events
are helpful for peace; provide friendship between
player
and
countries
, interchange
traditions
and bias of
global
games
authority for building new
event
order with a regular interval of time.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes