Some people say History is one of the most important schools subjects. Other people think, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. v.1
Some people say History is one of the most important schools subjects. Other people think, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. v. 1
To introduce, Although people can cook at their home, ordering food is playing a vital role in the modern world. Citizens feel that the home delivery system provides snacks, Which are delivered in few minutes, and it will have a great taste. This trend would have a plethora of merits which are essential, as well as, it also had some demerits which must be discussed.
Beginning with the purchasing either in the restaurant or online has a lot of benefits, Which we will discuss in this paragraph. Today, most of the humans spend on purchasing meal because of the easy delivery methods. Some of the pros we need to talk about buying eatables is the process of delivery, Which will allow to get it without waiting through e-catering services. In addition to this, if we want to prepare meals by our own, we need to consume huge energy for cooking processes, and hence it is nice to have.
Meanwhile, we are having a lot of cons, which will be mentioned in the below lines. Even though we have the positives, we have some negatives while purchasing at the hotel such as, it will be not hygienic for our health, and it is too expensive. As we discussed above, outside will not be healthy, and sometimes poisoning for example vomitings, fever, etc. . Will be occurred. Turning to the prices, these are too high that a middle class guy can't afford it, and, it have ill-effects.
To summarize, we can say that the above topic has advantages, as well as, some disadvantages. Therefore, these are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this trend such as easy system. Hence, these purchases must be diminished in order to be healthy.
To introduce, Although
people
can cook at their home, ordering food is playing a vital role in the modern world. Citizens feel that the home delivery system provides snacks, Which
are delivered
in few minutes, and it will have a great taste. This trend would have a plethora of merits which are essential,
as well
as, it
also
had
some
demerits which
must
be discussed
.
Beginning with the purchasing either in the restaurant or online has
a lot of
benefits, Which we will discuss in this paragraph.
Today
, most of the humans spend on purchasing meal
because
of the easy delivery methods.
Some of the
pros we need to talk about buying eatables is the process of delivery, Which will
allow
to
get
it without waiting through e-catering services.
In addition
to this, if we want to prepare meals by our
own
, we need to consume huge energy for cooking processes, and
hence
it is nice to have.
Meanwhile, we are having
a lot of
cons, which will
be mentioned
in the below lines.
Even though
we have the positives, we have
some
negatives while purchasing at the hotel such as, it will be not hygienic for our health, and it is too expensive. As we discussed above, outside will not be healthy, and
sometimes
poisoning
for example
vomitings
, fever, etc.
.
Will
be occurred
. Turning to the prices, these are too high that a middle
class
guy can't afford it, and, it
have
ill-effects.
To summarize
, we can say that the above topic has advantages,
as well
as,
some
disadvantages.
Therefore
, these are
some of the
advantages and disadvantages of this trend such as easy system.
Hence
, these
purchases
must
be diminished
in order to be healthy.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes