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Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.5

Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. v. 5
Nowadays a wide range of activities are related to teamwork where we have to work in with various types of people. Sometimes, it is better to work in a group for an intricate task despite numerous persons are barely capable of working with peers. My next sentences will put light on both sides before jumping to a conclusion. First and foremost, a closer look at the group work activities shows that the project in a group can be understood profoundly as all the peers provide different ideas. Thus, the pros and cons can easily be taken into account. Moreover, such projects are very time efficient and have a few errors. Along with smart workmanship, we can get a scope of having friendship with coworkers. For example, a few years ago, I accomplished an assignment of making a prototype of a tall building. There I worked with other four of my classmates, and consequently became very good friends and our project got accolades from critics. On the other hand, working alone for an assignment holds a huge number of problems, however some people may have contradictions. In fact, working alone is too much monotonous and takes too much times. Most of the times, it may distract us from understanding the purpose and goal of the project. Furthermore, if anyone works alone, he will have less time to make company with peers. For instance, one of my classmates always prefered to work alone beacuse he couldn' t make good partnership with his groupmates. As a consequence, everyone including intently tried to avoid his because of his behavioral issues. Also, he consistently got the poor grades in his projects. Overall, working in a group is better than working in desperately though there might have some ambiguities and dissentions. We can overcome limitations and find the best way of doing our tasks if we can work in a negotiable path.
Nowadays a wide range of activities
are related
to teamwork where we
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have to
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in with various types of
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people
.
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Sometimes
, it is better to
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work
in a
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group
for an intricate task despite numerous persons are
barely
capable of
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working
with peers. My
next
sentences will put light on both sides
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before
jumping to a conclusion.

First
and foremost, a closer look at the
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group
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work
activities
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shows
that the
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project
in a
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group
can
be understood
profoundly
as all the peers provide
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different
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ideas
.
Thus
, the pros and cons can
easily
be taken
into account.
Moreover
, such
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projects
are
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very
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time
efficient and have a few errors. Along with smart workmanship, we can
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get
a scope of having friendship with coworkers.
For example
, a few years ago, I accomplished an assignment of making a prototype of a tall building. There I worked with other four of my classmates, and
consequently
became
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very
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good
friends and our
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project
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got
accolades from critics.

On the other hand
,
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working
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alone
for an assignment holds a huge number of problems,
however
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some
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people
may have contradictions. In fact,
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working
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alone
is too much monotonous and takes too
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much
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times
. Most of the
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times
, it may distract us from understanding the purpose and goal of the
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project
.
Furthermore
, if anyone works
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alone
, he will have less
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time
to
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make
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company
with peers.
For instance
, one of my classmates always
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prefered
to
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work
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alone
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beacuse
he
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make
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good
partnership with his
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groupmates
. As a consequence, everyone including
intently
tried to avoid his
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because
of his behavioral issues.
Also
, he
consistently
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got
the poor grades in his projects.

Overall
,
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working
in a
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group
is better than
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working
in
desperately
though there might have
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some
ambiguities and
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dissentions
. We can overcome limitations and find the best way of doing our tasks if we can
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work
in a negotiable path.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
316 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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