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The college years are the best time in a person's life. Agree or Disagree. Give reasons to support your opinion. v.6

The college years are the best time in a person's life. Agree or Disagree. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 6
There are periods of time in any person' s life that can be considered as a mile stone and the college years have such meaning to me and was my best years. It was one of the most prolific period of my life as I made a dozens of sincere friends, I learned a lot about diverse subjects other than academic subjects, and I practiced teamwork, which is a part of my current career as a researcher. When I entered the college I was astonished by the ambiance of the people. I met students who had come from different parts of the country. In fact, I gained the chance of knowing my country better than I used to, by making friends with them. Fortunately, I met some rare-found persons among them who are still my close friends. Having good friends in college, my friends and I started to join some students' organizations such as Green Lovers, the organization with the purpose of enhancing the students knowledge about environment conservation. We also joined some sports clubs as well as some cultural causes. Those experiences thought me a lot about the society I live in. Moreover, college students have young and fresh minds. They are usually creative, ready to take risks, and they have tendency to be influential. These are the characteristics which help people to make teams and cooperate in order to make a difference. In my years of college attendance, my friend and I participated in a General Health Education. Our supervisor helped us to organize a team, defined the goal of the project for us, and gave valuable pieces of advice whenever we needed. Through the collaborative work, brainstorming sessions, and regular evaluations, I learned good lessons of how to work as a team member. To make a conclusion, I would like to indicate that the college period is a unique opportunity. Young students can make long-lasting and deep friendships. They can learn a lot not only about academic subjects but also about the real live and society. Moreover, they can learn how to work together, which is essential for being successful in their future jobs. Therefore, I believe that the college year is the best time of a person' s life.
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as a mile stone and the college years have such meaning to me and was my best years. It was one of the most prolific period of my life as I made
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of sincere
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friends
, I learned a lot about diverse subjects other than academic subjects, and I practiced teamwork, which is a part of my
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career as a researcher.

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different
parts of the country. In fact, I gained the chance of knowing my country better than I
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friends
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rare-found persons among them who are
still
my close friends.

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friends
in college, my
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knowledge about environment conservation. We
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sports clubs
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cultural causes. Those experiences
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thought
me a lot about the society I
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in.

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, college
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students
have young and fresh minds. They are
usually
creative, ready to take
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risks
, and they have tendency to be influential. These are the characteristics which
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help
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people
to
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teams and cooperate in order to
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a difference. In my years of college attendance, my
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friend
and I participated in a General Health Education. Our supervisor
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helped
us to organize a team, defined the goal of the project for us, and gave valuable pieces of advice whenever we needed. Through the collaborative work, brainstorming sessions, and regular evaluations, I learned
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good
lessons of how to work as a team member.

To
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make
a conclusion, I would like to indicate that the college period is a unique opportunity. Young
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students
can
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make
long-lasting and deep friendships. They can learn a lot not
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only
about academic subjects
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also
about the real
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live
and society.
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, they can learn how to work together, which is essential for being successful in their future jobs.
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, I believe that the college
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is the best time of a
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IELTS essay The college years are the best time in a person's life. Agree or Disagree. Give reasons to support your opinion. v. 6

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
373 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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