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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that difference is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.12

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that difference is always a good thing. v. 12
With the increase of global economic and technological development, people's opinion of time spending on things has changed, thus making us try different things to gain new experience. Some people would love to spend time on the same stuff while others prefer to change. This essay will argue that even though to be changed and unchanged both have advantages and disadvantages, changing would be better for life. There are some benefits and drawbacks of being unchanged in doing things. In job career, employees who remain consistent in their work would develop proficient skills. For example, if people keep working on tour guides in the tourist industry, they would produce more professional managing and conversational skills. However, people might not be happy doing the same thing. If people do the work on the same thing, they will get bored with the routine. Therefore, people would practice well their skills by repeating the same words but would lose interest in it one day. Meanwhile, there are pros and cons of changing the daily routine. One typical advantage is that people can try different things to gain new experience. For instance, if people change jobs, they might make new friends, develop new skills in different positions. However, the con is people would not make progress in certain circumstances. People would not be able to receive opportunities to get promoted in their job career in companies because they do not spend more time practising skills in the position they work on. Consequently, changing daily routine creates benefits for people, but at the same time, they have to lose something in their life. In conclusion, even though changing daily routine have advantages and disadvantages, I believe that changing in doing something would be rewarding because as long as people do not change fast in the method, they can earn proficient skills in the previous routine, and adapt to gain another experience in doing different things in the life.
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and unchanged both have advantages and disadvantages,
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would be better for life.

There are
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benefits and drawbacks of
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things. In job career, employees who remain consistent in their work would develop proficient
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skills
.
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people
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keep
working on tour guides in the tourist industry, they would produce more professional managing and conversational
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skills
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,
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people
might not be happy
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the same thing. If
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do the work on the same thing, they will
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but
would lose interest in it one day.

Meanwhile, there are pros and cons of
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the daily
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. One typical advantage is that
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can try
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different
things to gain
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new
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people
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jobs, they might
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make
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friends, develop
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in
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companies
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because
they do not spend more
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practising
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in the position they work on.
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daily
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creates benefits for
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,
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, they
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lose something in their life.

In conclusion
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even though
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daily
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routine
have advantages and disadvantages, I believe that
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something would be rewarding
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do not
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in the method, they can earn proficient
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in the previous
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, and adapt to gain another experience in
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different
things in the life.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that difference is always a good thing. v. 12

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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