Some part of the population believes that parents should groom their children into healthy members of the social groups, whereas, remaining population believes that it's the job of their school teachers. My opinion is not only parents but also teachers have considerable part to play in educating children on how to be good members of society.
Children spend most of their time with their parents both in the evenings and weekends. This gives parents great opportunity to introduce their kids to different aspects of a humanity. For example, they can take their offsprings to various volunteering opportunities around the city where kids can understand the different needs of people and help them in areas where they need support. Along with that donating their toys and clothes to those in need is a great way for children to learn about sharing and supporting those who are not wealthy.
On the other hand, it should be noted that teachers have a more official role to play in imparting various knowledge in their pupils about building a healthy community and offering their time to parts of the population that are underprivileged. Teachers can build a specific curriculum which explains about historical stories about how the social structure was built over several decades and discuss modern research and findings about social dynamics. Along with that teachers can ask students to write assignments about how they wish to add value to their society either in their neighbourhood or in other communities they are part of.
In conclusion, I believe both parents and teachers play an equal role in teaching children how to be good members of society.
Some
part
of the population believes that
parents
should groom their
children
into healthy members of the social groups, whereas, remaining population believes that it's the job of their school
teachers
. My opinion is not
only
parents
but
also
teachers
have considerable
part
to play in educating
children
on how to be
good
members of society.
Children spend most of their time with their
parents
both in the evenings and weekends. This gives
parents
great opportunity to introduce their kids to
different
aspects of a humanity.
For example
, they can take their
offsprings
to various volunteering opportunities around the city where kids can understand the
different
needs of
people
and
help
them in areas where they need support. Along with that donating their toys and clothes to those in need is a great way for
children
to learn about sharing and supporting those who are not wealthy.
On the other hand
, it should
be noted
that
teachers
have a more official role to play in imparting various knowledge in their pupils about building a healthy community and offering their time to
parts
of the population that
are underprivileged
.
Teachers
can build a specific curriculum which
explains
about historical stories about how the social structure
was built
over several decades and discuss modern research and findings about social dynamics. Along with that
teachers
can ask students to write assignments about how they wish to
add
value to their society either in their
neighbourhood
or in other communities they are
part
of.
In conclusion
, I believe both
parents
and
teachers
play an equal role in teaching
children
how to be
good
members of society.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes