Recent trend shows that people prefer to take their beloved family members with them on their overseas work tour. While there are certain privileges associated with this, some drawbacks are also there for the person and his or her family. In this essay I will portray both the aspects of this latest tendency.
To begin with, people can always feel a homely atmosphere with their adored persons with them even if they are far away from their home. Since in abroad both the climate and food habits are different, individuals are always prone to get sick and no one will be available there to take care of them. Henceforth, if family members are present there, they can act as an enormous support. Nevertheless, the family members also come by a chance to spend an international holiday. A survey conducted by a group of researchers from Cox and Kings in 2018 has revealed that 37% of international family holiday plans started from their family members scheduled business trip to that country. Moreover, the children of the families obtain the maximum benefit as they witness the history, geography, architecture of that specific place about what they have been learning in their school books.
On the other hand, as the number of family members increases, the cost of the travel goes up exponentially, which is usually borne by the person. Besides, they cannot devote themselves fully on the job since their mind is always occupied with the thoughts of their kith and kin which eventually disrupts the basic purpose of the journey. Furthermore, the family members also became unable to savour the trip since one of them is preoccupied with some work related issues.
To sum up, this trend has several unquestionable usefulness along with various downsides. Henceforward, one should consider all the aspects of their own as well as the family before mixing up a family trip with business tour.
Recent trend
shows
that
people
prefer to take their beloved
family
members
with them on their overseas work tour. While there are certain privileges associated with this,
some
drawbacks are
also
there for the person and
his or her
family
. In this essay I will portray both the aspects of this latest tendency.
To
begin
with,
people
can always feel a homely atmosphere with their adored persons with them even if they are far away from their home. Since in abroad both the climate and food habits are
different
, individuals are always prone to
get
sick and no one will be available there to take care of them. Henceforth, if
family
members
are present there, they can act as an enormous support.
Nevertheless
, the
family
members
also
come
by a chance to spend an international holiday. A survey conducted by a group of researchers from Cox and Kings in 2018 has revealed that 37% of international
family
holiday plans
started
from their
family
members
scheduled business trip to that country.
Moreover
, the children of the
families
obtain the maximum benefit as they witness the history, geography, architecture of that specific place about what they have been learning in their school books.
On the other hand
, as the number of
family
members
increases, the cost of the travel goes up
exponentially
, which is
usually
borne by the person.
Besides
, they cannot devote themselves
fully
on the job since their mind is always occupied with the thoughts of their kith and kin which
eventually
disrupts the basic purpose of the journey.
Furthermore
, the
family
members
also
became unable to
savour
the trip since one of them
is preoccupied
with
some
work related issues.
To sum up, this trend has several unquestionable usefulness along with various downsides. Henceforward, one should consider all the aspects of their
own
as well
as the
family
before
mixing up a
family
trip with business tour.
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