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some people prefer to live in a small town. other prefer to live in a big city. which place would you prefer to live in? use specific reasons and details to support your answers v.10

some people prefer to live in a small town. other prefer to live in a big city. which place would you prefer to live in? use specific reasons and details to support your answers v. 10
The accelerated pace of Technology has enforced different type of lifestyles which is obviously depicted by living either in a city or in a town. And as a result of that, there has been a kind of drastic debate about the advantages and disadvantages of living inside or outside the city. In my opinion I think that living in a big city has positive sides more than negative ones, and especially if you are looking for a high educational institution to continue your studies and to build your future in a better way. Furthermore, living in a city means that you could have better opportunities to improve your life Standards by searching for your dream job that you have worked for in order to get it. But on the other hand, we can not overlook the negative sides of living there, for instance the air pollution which is certainly higher in the city, affects your health negatively. However, the overcrowded streets and the fast living characterized by excitement and risk-taking would create a state of stress which you can avoid by living in a small town. In addition of all that we all know that living in city has been lately more expensive than before due to the increased internal migration. In spite of all negative points I have mentioned before, I’d like to assert that living in a city give your own space and help you to accept different type of people and cultures. In conclusion, I would like to assert that your choice of living either in a big city or in a small town is determined by your personality and your way of thinking which play a rule in your decision.
The accelerated pace of Technology has enforced
different
type of lifestyles which is
obviously
depicted by
living
either in a city or in a town. And
as a result
of that, there has been a kind of drastic debate about the advantages and disadvantages of
living
inside or outside the city.

In my opinion I
think
that
living
in a
big
city has
positive
sides more than
negative
ones, and
especially
if you are looking for a high educational institution to continue your studies and to build your future in a better way.

Furthermore
,
living
in a city means that you could have better opportunities to
improve
your life

Standards by searching for your dream job that you have worked for in order to
get
it.

But
on the other hand
, we can not overlook the
negative
sides of
living
there,
for instance
the air pollution which is
certainly
higher in the city, affects your health
negatively
.

However
, the overcrowded streets and the
fast
living
characterized by excitement and
risk
-taking would create a state of
stress
which you can avoid by
living
in a
small
town.

In
addition
of all that we all know that
living
in city has been lately more expensive than
before
due to the increased internal migration.

In spite of
all
negative
points I have mentioned
before
, I’d like to assert that
living
in a city give your
own
space and
help
you to accept
different
type of
people
and cultures.

In
conclusion, I would like to assert that your choice of
living
either in a
big
city or in a
small
town
is determined
by your personality and your way of thinking which play a
rule
in your decision.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
10Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay some people prefer to live in a small town. other prefer to live in a big city. which place would you prefer to live in? use specific reasons and details to support your answers v. 10

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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