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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand? v.13

Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand? v. 13
Countries all over the world are struggling to increase the supply of food in this era. The prime reason of such scarcity of food has appeared as the world population has tremendously increased. Putting light on that fact that why such increase in population is the prime reason, this essay will also discuss the expected role to be played by authorities developed by nations. The booming population of a nation naturally pushes the demand for food. firstly, the country now has to feed more countrymen than that of past decades. As more mouths require more food, the demand keeps rising. Secondly, increasing citizens require more space to live, so the lands, previously used for cultivate crops as well as vegetables, are now used to make houses. Such actions not only reduces the agricultural production capacity of a country, but also limits the ability to fight back the food-crisis. Though, the increasing population reduces the country’s capability to produce more food, global bodies can play a vital role in meeting up food demand of nations. The authorities have to focus on integrated irrigation system with the combination of advanced cultivating techniques, use of technological instruments as well as genetically modified crops because the countries have to produce more food in limited space. Moreover, the authorities have to focus on developing global logistics system to withdraw the barriers of domestic borders among the nations to ensure that the food is produced in the most convenient place and distributed as per the demand. To conclude, as the population of the globe increases, global demand for food will continue to increase. But the meeting-up the demand solely depends on global authorities to ensure more production in available lands by integrated irrigation and developing border-less logistics system.
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food
has appeared as the world
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population
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discuss the
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authorities
developed by nations.

The booming
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population
of a nation
naturally
pushes the
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food
.
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firstly
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country
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has to
feed more countrymen than that of past decades. As more mouths require more
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food
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demand
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limits the ability to fight back the food-crisis.

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demand
of nations. The
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authorities
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have to
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modified crops
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countries
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in limited space.
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global
logistics system to withdraw the barriers of domestic borders among the nations to ensure that the
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food
is produced
in the most convenient place and distributed as per the demand.

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of the globe
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global
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solely
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global
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authorities
to ensure more production in available lands by integrated irrigation and developing border-less logistics system.
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36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the cause of this? What measures can the international community take to meet this demand? v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
292 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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