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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there is more advantage to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment? v.4

all humans have different choices and ways to live life some want to live in houses on the other hand some give preffrence to live in apartments. while there are benefits to live in apartment, living in house provide diffrent type peace and relaxation to innar soil. though i strongly advocate the notion to live in house. mankind live in house. in order to give happiness to famliy and him/ herself. it also a sweet dream which each and every person build according to their teste because each person want to build house and seprate room as per convinence of housmates. this is not only a place it is like a temple where all live with peace and love. their is personal space where people could be king of there daily life. moreover, it provide relaxation because all family member share their thing and thin days with each other. no hard rules that someone is being disturbed in next door, like apartments. No need to pay for parking space and share laundary which in common in apartments. they have more privacy in house than shared living places. in conclution, it is cristal clear that personal house provide inner satisfaction. because perdon can build rooms as per their choice and decorate it. they would grow diffrent kind flowers in garden no need to live under supervision of cameras. they can paint it or decore it according to them. also elder people love to live in house. so it best to spend life in own house
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humans have
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choices and ways to
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life
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live
in
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houses
on the other hand
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some
give
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preffrence
to
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live
in
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apartments
.
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while
there are benefits to
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live
in
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apartment
, living in
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house
provide
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diffrent
type peace and relaxation to
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innar
soil.
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though
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i
strongly
advocate the notion to
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live
in
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house
.

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mankind
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live
in
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house
.
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in
order to give happiness to
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famliy
and him/ herself.
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it
also
a sweet dream which each and every person build according to their
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teste
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because
each person want to build
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house
and
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seprate
room as per
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convinence
of
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housmates
.
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is not
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a place it is like a temple where all
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live
with peace and
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love
.
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their
is personal space where
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people
could be king of there daily life.

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moreover
, it
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provide
relaxation
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because
all family member share their thing and thin days with each other.
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no
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hard
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that someone is
being disturbed
in
next
door, like
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apartments
. No need to pay for parking space and share
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laundary
which in common in
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apartments
.
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they
have more privacy in
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house
than shared living places.

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in
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conclution
, it is
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cristal
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clear
that personal
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house
provide inner satisfaction.
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because
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perdon
can build rooms as per their choice and decorate it. they would grow
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diffrent
kind flowers in garden no need to
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live
under supervision of cameras.
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they
can paint it or
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decore
it according to them.
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also
elder
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people
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love
to
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live
in
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house
.
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so
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it
best to spend life in
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own
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house
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IELTS essay Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

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  American English
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253 words
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