Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other peopleprefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.4

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other peopleprefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4
Cooking and eating can be a source of experience and inspiration for people. Different people also have their preferences when it comes to choice of where to it. While some people prefer to prepare and eat food at home, personally, I prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. One reason why I prefer to eat out rather than at home is because I am not a good cook. At first, I thought it was my taste buds when I thought the food I prepared myself was tasteless, until my neighbor, Emeka, complained several times and then, stopped eating my food. I was just managing to eat it after cooking because I was the one who made the food, but after some time, I realized I was not getting any satisfaction out of it. At this point, I turned to restaurants and food stands. Luckily, the restaurant very close to my office, had delicious meals. I was equally satisfied with the taste and would always ask for more. Eating at restaurants gave me value for my money unlike when I was cooking. Also, with restaurants, I had variety to choose from. The restaurants I ate from offered varieties of food, both local and international cuisines, unlike my own food. I was limited to only a few choices when I cook, which made me eat the same meal every other day. It was quite monotonous. With eating at restaurants and food stands, I had various options to choose from. I tried out different dishes each day and now, I have experience of both international and national dishes. Finally, eating out at restaurants and food stands saves me a lot of time. When I used to cook, I spend about three hours battling out each meal. With restaurants, It takes me about thirty minutes to order and eat my food. I have now enrolled in an online masters degree program, utilizing the time I saved from cooking. In conclusion, while cooking could be a hobby for some people, it was a frustrating experience for me. From tasteless meals to lack of variety and not having enough time for other things, cooking and eating at home couldn' t have been an option for me. With eating at restaurants and food stands, I now have time for other things. I also have the satisfaction I desire.
Cooking and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
can be a source of experience and inspiration for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
also
have their preferences when it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
comes
to choice of where to it. While
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
prefer to prepare and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
at home,
personally
, I prefer to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stands
or restaurants.

One reason why I prefer to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
out
rather
than at home is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I am not a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
cook. At
first
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
it was my taste buds when I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
I prepared myself was tasteless, until my neighbor,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Emeka
, complained several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
and then,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stopped
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. I was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
managing to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
it after cooking
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I was the one who made the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
after
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, I realized I was not getting any satisfaction out of it. At this point, I turned to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stands
. Luckily, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
close to my office, had delicious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
. I was
equally
satisfied with the taste and would always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ask for
more.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Eating
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
gave me value for my money unlike when I was cooking.

Also
, with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
, I had variety to choose from. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
I ate from offered varieties of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
, both local and international cuisines, unlike my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. I
was limited
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a few choices when I cook, which made me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
every other day. It was quite monotonous. With
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stands
, I had various options to choose from. I tried out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
dishes each day and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
, I have experience of both international and national dishes.

Finally
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
out at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stands
saves me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to cook, I spend about three hours battling out each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meal
. With
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
, It takes me about thirty minutes to order and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eat
my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
. I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
enrolled in an online
For an academic degree, use "master’s".
masters
degree program, utilizing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
I saved from cooking.

In conclusion
, while cooking could be a hobby for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, it was a frustrating experience for me. From tasteless
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meals
to lack of variety and not having
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for other things, cooking and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
at home
Possible spelling mistake found.
couldn&
#039; t have been an option for me. With
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
eating
at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurants
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stands
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
for other things. I
also
have the satisfaction I desire.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
53Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other peopleprefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 4

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
392 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts