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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v.2

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2
Since the dawn of the humanity, eating proper food has always played crucial role in humans’ lifestyle. In this regard, the place where people eat their foods is important. Had people realized the significance and advantages of a proper place to cook and eat their foods, they would have deliberated on it much more meticulously. Nowadays, a majority of people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants, on the contrary to this popular view, there are those who subscribe to the idea that preparing and eating food at home is convenient. In my opinion, eating out significantly outweighs those of prefer to eat at home. The reasons why I incline to eating out are manifold, three of which-that is- primarily, the great atmosphere at restaurants, save time, and diversity of choices, are among the most conspicuous ones. A subtle explanation to why I prefer to eat at restaurants, rests on the fact that restaurants and food stands have great atmosphere which everyone can benefited of it. In today’s hectic and chaotic life, feeling relax plays a great role. There are a quit a few people at restaurants who talk to each other, tell jokes and laugh, to name but a handful and such this place increases people’s appetite This is mainly because, one can feel better at crowed place when watching other people and this leads to help everyone to have great mood. Besides, putting the discussion in a further context, the second reasons why I agree with eating out is that there is no time for preparing for food and washing dishes after that. By this, a lot of time can be saved. Time, as we all know, is money. Eating out can save a lot of time rather than preparing foods at home. Last but not least, there are a lot of choices at restaurants rather than at home. People must buy a cookbook to prepare diversity of food, however, there are all kinds of restaurants such as Chinese restaurants, English restaurants, to name but a few. Also each of them have a different menu which everyone can choose one of them easily. Having touched on the topic that aspect, I tend to discuss it from another perspective as well. Some people believe that eating out is dangerous. The foods which cook at restaurants are not healthy. The processes of preparing foods and the nutrients which used are not clear. With this in mind, eating out may causes to many illnesses such as digestive cancer. This may be true to some extent; however, the fact that there are a quite a few food stands that prepare their foods with fresh nutrients. Considering the aforementioned arguments and discussions, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that is not rational to underestimate the advantages of restaurants. There are all kinds of food stands in every town and everyone can enjoy to eat at them rather than home.
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eating
proper
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food
has always played crucial role in humans’ lifestyle. In this regard, the
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place
where
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people
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eat
their
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foods
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important
. Had
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people
realized the significance and advantages of a proper
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place
to cook and
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eat
their
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foods
, they would have deliberated on it much more
meticulously
. Nowadays, a majority of
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people
prefer to
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eat
at
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food
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stands
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restaurants
,
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to this popular view, there are those who subscribe to the
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idea
that preparing and
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food
at home is convenient. In my opinion,
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eating
out
significantly
outweighs those of prefer to
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eat
at home. The reasons why I incline to
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eating
out are manifold, three of which-
that is
-
primarily
, the
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great
atmosphere at
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restaurants
, save
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time
, and diversity of choices, are among the most conspicuous ones.

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eat
at
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restaurants
, rests on the fact that
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and
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food
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stands
have
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great
atmosphere which
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everyone
can
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benefited
of it. In
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today
’s hectic and chaotic life, feeling relax plays a
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great
role. There are a quit a few
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people
at
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restaurants
who talk to each other,
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tell
jokes and laugh, to name
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but
a handful and such this
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place
increases
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people’s
appetite This is
mainly
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because
, one can feel better at crowed
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place
when watching other
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people
and this leads to
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help
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everyone
to have
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great
mood.
Besides
, putting the discussion in a
further
context, the second reasons why I
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agree
with
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eating
out is that there is no
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time
for preparing for
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and washing dishes after that. By this,
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a lot of
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time
can
be saved
.
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Time
, as we all know, is money.
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out can save
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time
rather
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at home. Last
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not least, there are
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choices at
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must
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buy
a cookbook to prepare diversity of
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food
,
however
, there are all kinds of
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such as Chinese
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, English
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each of them have a
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menu which
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everyone
can choose one of them
easily
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Having touched on the topic that aspect, I tend to discuss it from another perspective
as well
.
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people
believe that
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out is
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dangerous
. The
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foods
which cook at
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are not healthy. The processes of preparing
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foods
and the nutrients which
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illnesses such as digestive cancer. This may be true to
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extent;
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, the fact that there are a quite a few
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food
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stands
that prepare their
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foods
with fresh nutrients.

Considering the aforementioned arguments and discussions, we may
safely
arrive at the conclusion
that is
not rational to underestimate the advantages of
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restaurants
. There are all kinds of
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food
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stands
in every town and
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everyone
can enjoy to
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eat
at them
rather
than home.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
68Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes
One should not aim at being possible to understand but at being impossible to misunderstand.
Marcus Fabius Quintilian

IELTS essay Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurant. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
488 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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