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Some people like to communicate by e-mail and voice mail other people like to communicate by telephone or face to face which type of communication do you prefer and why? be sure to include specific details and examples to support your opinion v.2

Some people like to communicate by e-mail and voice mail other people like to communicate by telephone or face to face which type of communication do you prefer and why? be sure to include specific details and examples to support your opinion v. 2
E-mail, voice mail, telephone, and face to face contact are means of comunicating among community. E-mail and voice mail are faster than any other means of letter system but according to me, in spite of this telephonic and direct face to face contact is better option. There are two main reasons why I prefer this option. These reasons surfaced while meticulously evaluating this issue. At first, one study suggested that people use e-mail and voice mail option because they are lacking the ability of conversing with others. Further more, they suggested that face to face contact will increase trust. we can detect lie easily while having telephonic and face to face contact. Body language plays important role while reflecting our personality. Emotions evoked during direct contact will be immediately detected. Through voicemail also its not easy to detect lie. according to psychology people with courage and confidence choose contacting via phone calls. another but main perspective to use other type of media is to save time. we are very busy today. one can not rely on any time of mails. When we mail someone we silently poke them but while calling or face to face contact we acquire attention of other one. Due to this a link between two contactingpeople will bring conclusion and decision will be taken faster than email system. Once I brought a dress online and it was faulty piece. I choose option of email over calling to contact them and it took 3 days to complete one simple talk. So from next time I better be choosing telephonic option. E-mail and voice mail are considered as proof and can be presented in court. Technology had developed and we can record anything and court will surely accept this as a proof. IF other person is busy and to ask him to spare some time for me, I go for email and voice mail. Rest of time I prefer using direct contact method to ensure all processes will be finished within time. Hence in conclusion, After this holistic analysis we can clearly see that mail process has its own benefits but all thoughts have proclivity towards another thought.
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mail, telephone, and
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to
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are means of
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comunicating
among community. E-mail and
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voice
mail are faster than any
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other
means of letter system
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but
according to me,
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in spite of
this telephonic and direct
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face
to
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face
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contact
is better
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option
. There are two main reasons why I prefer this
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option
. These reasons surfaced while
meticulously
evaluating this issue.

At
first
, one study suggested that
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people
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use
e-mail and
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voice
mail
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option
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because
they are lacking the ability of conversing with others.
Further
more, they suggested that
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face
to
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face
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contact
will increase trust.
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we
can detect lie
easily
while having telephonic and
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face
to
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face
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contact
. Body language plays
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important
role while reflecting our personality. Emotions evoked during direct
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contact
will be immediately detected. Through voicemail
also
its not easy to detect lie.
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according
to psychology
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people
with courage and confidence choose
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contacting
via phone calls.

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another
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but
main perspective to
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use
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other
type of media is to save
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time
.
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we
are
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very
busy
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today
.
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one
can not rely on any
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time
of mails. When we mail someone we
silently
poke them
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but
while calling or
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face
to
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face
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contact
we acquire attention of
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other
one. Due to this a link between two
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contactingpeople
will bring conclusion and decision will
be taken
faster than email system. Once I brought a dress online and it was faulty piece. I choose
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option
of email over calling to
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contact
them and it took 3 days to complete one simple talk.
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So
from
next
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time
I better be choosing telephonic option.

E-mail and
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voice
mail
are considered
as proof and can
be presented
in court. Technology had
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developed and
we can record anything and court will
surely
accept this as a proof. IF
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other
person is busy and to ask him to spare
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some
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time
for me, I go for email and
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voice
mail. Rest of
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time
I prefer using direct
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contact
method to ensure all processes will
be finished
within time.

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Hence
in conclusion
, After this holistic analysis we can
clearly
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see
that mail process has its
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own
benefits
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but
all thoughts have proclivity towards another
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thought
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
36Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people like to communicate by e-mail and voice mail other people like to communicate by telephone or face to face which type of communication do you prefer and why? be sure to include specific details and examples to support your opinion v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
360 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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