The rate at which individuals indulge in various social vices is quite alarming and this has led to some people insisting that there should be constant consequences for each kind of mischief one is involved in, while others argue that factors such as the prevailing situation and the enthusiasm for carrying out such should be considered alongside. In my essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.
Establishing fixed penalties for any crime committed will help cut down the height at which social vices have reached and citizens will be cautious about engaging in crime. For instance, when one use guns and knives to forcefully obtain money from another, he or she when caught, should be locked up in jail for a year. In this situation, before an individual decides to go into robbery, he or she will have to think about it twice.
On the other hand, if the government enacts policies against crime involvement and putting into consideration variables such as the circumstances and motivation for committing it, it will further help to wipe out vices from the society. Take for example, the two criminals of which both stole money from the bank and were caught. When interviewed, one says he went into robbery because he wants to save his mother who is suffering from cancer while the other person went stealing because he had no food to eat. Weighing both circumstances, the punishment of the former will be lighter than that of the latter.
To conclude, both fixed punishments and considering the circumstances around such crime will help cut down the rate of crime
The rate at which individuals indulge in various social vices is quite alarming and this has led to  
some
  people
 insisting that there should be constant consequences for each kind of mischief one  
is involved
 in, while others argue that factors such as the prevailing situation and the enthusiasm for carrying out such should  
be considered
 alongside. In my essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.
Establishing  
fixed
 penalties for any  
crime
 committed will  
help
  cut
 down the height at which social vices have reached and citizens will be cautious about engaging in  
crime
.  
For instance
, when one  
use
 guns and knives to  
forcefully
 obtain money from another, he or she when caught, should  
be locked
 up in jail for a year. In this situation,  
before
 an individual decides to go into robbery, he or she will  
have to
  think
 about it twice. 
On the other hand
, if the  
government
 enacts policies against  
crime
 involvement and putting into consideration variables such as the circumstances and motivation for committing it, it will  
further
  help
 to wipe out vices from the society. Take  
for example
, the two criminals of which both stole money from the bank and  
were caught
. When interviewed, one says he went into robbery  
because
 he wants to save his mother who is suffering from cancer while the other person went stealing  
because
 he had no food to eat. Weighing both circumstances, the punishment of the former will be lighter than that of the latter. 
To conclude
, both  
fixed
 punishments and considering the circumstances around such  
crime
 will  
help
  cut
 down the rate of  
crime
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