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Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school Do you agree or disagree v.1

Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school v. 1
The rate at which individuals indulge in various social vices is quite alarming and this has led to some people insisting that there should be constant consequences for each kind of mischief one is involved in, while others argue that factors such as the prevailing situation and the enthusiasm for carrying out such should be considered alongside. In my essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion. Establishing fixed penalties for any crime committed will help cut down the height at which social vices have reached and citizens will be cautious about engaging in crime. For instance, when one use guns and knives to forcefully obtain money from another, he or she when caught, should be locked up in jail for a year. In this situation, before an individual decides to go into robbery, he or she will have to think about it twice. On the other hand, if the government enacts policies against crime involvement and putting into consideration variables such as the circumstances and motivation for committing it, it will further help to wipe out vices from the society. Take for example, the two criminals of which both stole money from the bank and were caught. When interviewed, one says he went into robbery because he wants to save his mother who is suffering from cancer while the other person went stealing because he had no food to eat. Weighing both circumstances, the punishment of the former will be lighter than that of the latter. To conclude, both fixed punishments and considering the circumstances around such crime will help cut down the rate of crime
The rate at which individuals indulge in various social vices is quite alarming and this has led to
some
people
insisting that there should be constant consequences for each kind of mischief one
is involved
in, while others argue that factors such as the prevailing situation and the enthusiasm for carrying out such should
be considered
alongside. In my essay, I will discuss both views and state my opinion.

Establishing
fixed
penalties for any
crime
committed will
help
cut
down the height at which social vices have reached and citizens will be cautious about engaging in
crime
.
For instance
, when one
use
guns and knives to
forcefully
obtain money from another, he or she when caught, should
be locked
up in jail for a year. In this situation,
before
an individual decides to go into robbery, he or she will
have to
think
about it twice.

On the other hand
, if the
government
enacts policies against
crime
involvement and putting into consideration variables such as the circumstances and motivation for committing it, it will
further
help
to wipe out vices from the society. Take
for example
, the two criminals of which both stole money from the bank and
were caught
. When interviewed, one says he went into robbery
because
he wants to save his mother who is suffering from cancer while the other person went stealing
because
he had no food to eat. Weighing both circumstances, the punishment of the former will be lighter than that of the latter.

To conclude
, both
fixed
punishments and considering the circumstances around such
crime
will
help
cut
down the rate of
crime
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IELTS essay Some people find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience Do you think public skill is really important Give reasons Some people say public speaking should be taught at school v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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