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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really very important? Give reasons. Some people say that public speaking should be taught at school. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really very important? Give reasons. Some people say that public speaking should be taught at school. v. 2
Speaking in front of audiences is an ability of which people struggle. I think speaking skills are really important. Some people argue that it should be taught at school and I partially agree with the argument. For several reasons speaking skills are very important for students, university students and every member of society. Firstly, the one who is talkative, can attract others attention very easily. For example, at school, the students who have special speaking skills are able to attract both teachers and pupils' attention. Moreover, they also manage their lecture presentation easier than the others. Although it is crucial for students to have speaking skills, it is more important for university students as they have to give presentation for more audience. Secondly, the individuals who have speaking skills can manage to achieve their goals at work. They may convince their bosses to promote them to higher positions. Finally, every member of society should have a minimum requirement and self confidence to give a speech to the audience. On the other hand, in my opinion, the speech abilities should be taught during school by teachers and at home by parents. Initially, the kids are looking at their parents and imitate their habits. If the parent talk in a right way, the children try to speak confidently. However, they may not be able to teach them how to gain the skills, teachers have been trained to teach children how to speak more fluently and self esteem. For instance, the teacher can ask each member of the class to give a speech to others frequently and for different topics. In conclusion, speaking skills are crucial for everybody and children should be taught the skills by parents and teachers.
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skills
are
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very
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important
for
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students
, university
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students
and every member of society.
Firstly
, the one who is talkative, can attract others attention
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very
easily
.
For example
, at school, the
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students
who have special speaking
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skills
are able to attract both
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teachers
and pupils' attention.
Moreover
, they
also
manage their lecture presentation easier than the others. Although it is crucial for
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students
to have speaking
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skills
, it is more
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important
for university
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students
as they
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have to
give presentation for more audience.
Secondly
, the individuals who have speaking
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skills
can manage to achieve their goals at work. They may convince their bosses to promote them to higher positions.
Finally
, every member of society should have a minimum requirement and
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self confidence
to give a speech to the audience.

On the
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other
hand, in my opinion, the speech abilities should
be taught
during school by
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teachers
and at home by
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parents
.
Initially
, the kids are looking at their
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parents
and imitate their habits. If the
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parent
talk
Consider replacing "in a right way" with the adverb for "right"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a right way
, the children try to speak
confidently
.
However
, they may not be able to teach them how to gain the
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skills
,
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teachers
have
been trained
to teach children how to speak more
fluently
and
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self esteem
.
For instance
, the
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teacher
can ask each member of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
to give a speech to others
frequently
and for
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different
topics.

In conclusion
, speaking
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skills
are crucial for everybody and children should
be taught
the
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skills
by
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parents
and
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teachers
.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really very important? Give reasons. Some people say that public speaking should be taught at school. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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