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People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. Some people say public speaking should be taught at school. Do you agree or disagree? v.4

People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. Some people say public speaking should be taught at school. v. 4
In the modernized globe, public speaking is an art, and it is necessary in the life. Some people argue that, since it is hard to present as well as speak in front of numbers of people, it should be taught at school. In my opinion, I totally agree with the public speaking skill should be taught to children in school due to a myriad of reasons like people can improve their personality, confidence and many more. To commence with, the person gives a speech in front of lots of people, so he/she can enhance their confidence whenever he/she get the positive response from audiences. And also, people speak fluently without hesitation as well as, they can overcome their stage fear. Additionally, if individuals are good to give a presentation, so it will help them to make healthy finance in their future life and in the workplace. Furthermore, people can also improve their personality and learn how to speak in public and answer the questions of viewers as well as, use their creative ideas to answer that doubts or questions. Thus, it is pre-dominant skill which everyone should have and beneficial for them. There is no doubt that public speaking should be a part of the school curriculum. As a result, If children learn public speaking skills, so they might habitually speak and face a lot of people, which will be beneficial in their personal as well as, professional life. Moreover, school should be started with story telling and elocution competitions fir pupils. As a result, pupils might attract toward take part in that competition. For instance, offsprings should start to speak in public at their small age, so, they might become proficient. In conclusion, I would certainly believe that parents and teachers should encourage to children for taking part in public speaking. People also convey their ideas to other persons which must important in field like sales department.
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speaking is an art, and it is necessary in the life.
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people
argue that, since it is
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hard
to present as
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as
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speak
in front of numbers of
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people
, it should
be taught
at
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school
. In my opinion, I
totally
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agree
with the
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public
speaking
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skill
should
be taught
to children in
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school
due to a myriad of reasons like
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people
can
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improve
their personality, confidence and
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many
more.

To commence with, the person gives a speech in front of lots of
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people
,
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so
he/she can enhance their confidence whenever he/she
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get
the
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positive
response from audiences. And
also
,
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people
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speak
fluently
without hesitation as
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well
as, they can overcome their stage fear.
Additionally
, if individuals are
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good
to give a presentation,
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so
it will
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help
them to
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make
healthy finance in their future life and in the workplace.
Furthermore
,
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people
can
also
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improve
their personality and learn how to
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speak
in
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public
and answer the questions of viewers as
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well
as,
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use
their creative
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ideas
to answer that doubts or questions.
Thus
, it is
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pre-dominant
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skill
which everyone should have and beneficial for them.

There is no doubt that
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public
speaking should be a part of the
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school
curriculum.
As a result
, If children learn
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public
speaking
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skills
,
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so
they might
habitually
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speak
and face
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a lot of
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people
, which will be beneficial in their personal as
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well
as, professional life.
Moreover
,
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school
should be
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started
with story telling and elocution competitions fir pupils.
As a result
, pupils might attract toward
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take part
in that competition.
For instance
,
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offsprings
should
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start
to
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speak
in
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public
at their
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small
age,
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so
, they might become proficient.

In conclusion
, I would
certainly
believe that parents and teachers should encourage to children for taking part in
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public
speaking.
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People
also
convey their
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ideas
to other persons which
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must
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important
in field like sales department.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay People find it very difficult to speak in public or to give a presentation before an audience. Do you think public speaking skill is really important? Give reasons. Some people say public speaking should be taught at school. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
318 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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