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Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programs should continue no matter what the cost. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. v.1

Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programs should continue no matter what the cost. v. 1
In this contemporary era, science has been soared great curiosity on mankind. It has been mooted issue regarding extreme cost of space research and expectation of fruitful benefits to the society. This essay discusses about dark and bright side of the above notion. In my opinion, such research should continue to betterment of our future generations. To begin with, positive side of the efforts taken by space agencies to understand the galaxy. Firstly, space exploration enables many technologies related to our routine life such as weather forecast, navigation by using phone with the help of satellite. Whist no evidence of life is discovered by astronauts in our solar system, efforts are still continued to go beyond the solar system. Secondly, exploring the space not only ensure the people about safety of human existence from many hypothetical dangers but also strengthen them to survive in any extreme condition. Thus space research is developing the society as well as provides ease in their living. On the other hand, some people oppose such huge amount of expenditure on space exploration, because they think that major investment should done to improve standard of living of many civilians. Researchers from IIM survey that in developing countries of Asia and Africa sub-continent citizens are still lacking to fulfil their basic needs. Moreover few scientist are more worried about space wastages emitted by spaceships and satellites. Thus inventions without moral responsibility and awareness might not be fruitful. In conclusion, the inventions done by scientist in space brings many advantages to the civilians; and inspire them to find is there only human beings in this mysterious galaxy? The administrative should also look after the ethical points during such activity such as unexploited the environment and space.
In this contemporary era, science has
been soared
great curiosity on mankind. It has
been mooted
issue regarding extreme cost of
space
research and expectation of fruitful benefits to the society. This essay
discusses about dark
and bright side of the above notion. In my opinion, such research should continue to betterment of our future generations.

To
begin
with,
positive
side of the efforts taken by
space
agencies to understand the galaxy.
Firstly
,
space
exploration enables
many
technologies related to our routine life such as weather forecast, navigation by using phone with the
help
of satellite. Whist no evidence of life
is discovered
by astronauts in our solar system, efforts are
still
continued to go beyond the solar system.
Secondly
, exploring the
space
not
only
ensure the
people
about safety of human existence from
many
hypothetical
dangers
but
also
strengthen them to survive in any extreme condition.
Thus
space
research is developing the society
as well
as provides
ease
in their living.

On the other hand
,
some
people
oppose such huge amount of expenditure on
space
exploration,
because
they
think
that major investment should
done
to
improve
standard of living of
many
civilians. Researchers from IIM survey that in
developing countries
of Asia and Africa sub-continent citizens are
still
lacking to fulfil their basic needs.
Moreover
few scientist
are more worried about
space
wastages
emitted by spaceships and satellites.
Thus
inventions without moral responsibility and awareness might not be fruitful.

In conclusion
, the inventions done by scientist in
space
brings
many
advantages to the civilians; and inspire them to find is there
only
human beings in this mysterious galaxy? The administrative should
also
look after the ethical points during such activity such as unexploited the environment and
space
.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people feel that the cost of space exploration is far too high for the benefits it brings while others argue that space programs should continue no matter what the cost. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
288 words
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