There is no doubt that the space is still unexplored and unknown. While some argue that these explorations cost more than its advantages, I believe if we want to expand our knowledge beyond our planet. We should continue this effort. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, many feel the budgets of interplanetary missions, such as finding water on Mars, are significant. This is because the technology used in these missions is very expensive. For instance, the rover builds to navigate the Mars' surface was around $10 million. Furthermore, we should also take into account the valuable information it is sending back. Although it might not be useful today, but this can be used as a basis of many researches in the future. If we had this mentality a century ago, we would not have landed on the Moon and Mars.
On the other hand, the rate at which we are ruining our Earth. We will soon need another one. Keeping this in mind, the government should double their efforts toward finding new habitable planets. For example, every country should set up divisions for space exploration. This will create a sense of competition among nations, and will benefit people as a result. In addition, with increasing population. We are running out of land and fresh water. Therefore, spending on these programs is justified.
To conclude, I think this is the right time to increase spending on space programs. With the amount of data that is collected for future use, and the danger of vanishing drinkable water justifies how essential they are.
There is no doubt that the space is
still
unexplored and unknown. While
some
argue that these explorations cost more than its advantages, I believe if we want to expand our knowledge beyond our planet. We should continue this effort. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument.
On the one hand,
many feel
the budgets of interplanetary missions, such as finding water on Mars, are significant. This is
because
the technology
used
in these missions is
very
expensive.
For instance
, the rover builds to navigate the Mars' surface was around $10 million.
Furthermore
, we should
also
take into account the valuable information it is sending back. Although it might not be useful
today
,
but
this can be
used
as a basis of
many
researches in the future. If we had this mentality a century ago, we would not have landed on the Moon and Mars.
On the other hand
, the rate at which we are ruining our Earth. We will
soon
need another one. Keeping this in mind, the
government
should double their efforts toward finding new habitable planets.
For example
, every country should set up divisions for space exploration. This will create a sense of competition among nations, and will benefit
people
as a result
.
In addition
, with increasing population. We are running out of land and fresh water.
Therefore
, spending on these programs
is justified
.
To conclude
, I
think
this is the right time to increase spending on space programs. With the amount of data that
is collected
for future
use
, and the
danger
of vanishing drinkable water justifies how essential they are.
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