It has been well discussed around the globe that, celebrities are getting more wages compare with other professionals. On the other hand, there have many jobs where we need to pay higher salaries as compare with celebrities. Like every coin, it has two sides. It also shed light on both before drawing a logical conclusion.
On one side of the issue, people think that it brings many positive aspects. The first one can be said that the quality of the work will be improved as well as they will engage with many social activities. For example, nowadays many actors and film stars are helping poor people. However, the teachers should be paid a higher salary as they are building our nation. They are entertained with a lower amount, as a result, highly qualified peoples are not interested in teaching profession.
On the other side, others hold some opposing view which cannot be neglected. To begin with actors is being focused on their works rather then addressing the quality. For example, now people are not often watching movies when they are passing leisure time. Besides that, If we encourage our teacher with handsome wages, they are not conscious about the study of the students as they are always thinking about how to earn money. In recent years study shows that, there have lots of coaching centres are in the city and teachers are being given their most of the time in these learning homes without providing time at school.
To recapitulate, I would like to clarify my opinion that the positive aspect outweigh the down sites to a large extent. I think what i have stated in this essay underline my viewpoint and requires no more discussion.
It has been well discussed around the globe that, celebrities are getting more wages compare with
other
professionals. On the
other
hand, there have
many
jobs where we need to pay higher salaries as compare with celebrities. Like every coin, it has two sides. It
also
shed light on both
before
drawing a logical conclusion.
On one side of the issue,
people
think
that it brings
many
positive
aspects. The
first
one can
be said
that the quality of the work will be
improved
as well
as they will engage with
many
social activities.
For example
, nowadays
many
actors and film stars are helping poor
people
.
However
, the teachers should
be paid
a higher salary as they are building our nation. They
are entertained
with a lower amount,
as a result
,
highly
qualified
peoples
are not interested in teaching profession.
On the
other
side, others hold
some
opposing view which cannot
be neglected
. To
begin
with actors is
being focused
on their works
rather
then
addressing the quality.
For example
,
now
people
are not
often
watching movies when they are passing leisure time.
Besides
that, If we encourage our teacher with handsome wages, they are not conscious about the study of the students as they are always thinking about how to earn money. In recent years study
shows
that, there have lots of coaching
centres
are in the city and teachers are being
given
their most of the time in these learning homes without providing time at school.
To recapitulate, I would like to clarify my opinion that the
positive
aspect outweigh the down sites to a large extent. I
think
what
i
have stated in this essay underline my viewpoint and requires no more discussion.
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