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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.11

News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 11
Pictures are usually attached to the news stories on television or in tabloids. Several people think that the images shown relate to the bulletin explain the reports more effectively than the text. In my opinion, it is very hard to understand the whole situation just only by the glimpse of a picture or a video and the words are required to present the story to everyone. Statements, written in the newspaper are necessarily required to explain an incident or to convey a message to the readers but, the pictures in them self are not enough to state the whole circumstance during, before or after an event. People argue that the pictures are sufficient to explain everything and words are not needed to convey the news, which obviously doesn’t seem to be appropriate. For example, the ongoing outbreak of corona virus, if the government needs to issue some guidelines for the civilians in order to tackle the virus then, it would be difficult to instruct the civilians via the pictures. Hence, the newspaper readers or the audiences watching Tv either may not understand the message or may understand it falsely so, the pictures alone are incomplete to explain the news and show the details hence, the words are required. Furthermore, pictures and statements matter a lot and tell us everything clearly if together, but if the TV and the Tabloids, start using images only for the bulletin then, it may mislead the public and may become the reason for the riots and other violence in the society. For instance, a picture in the newspaper showing the black people being enslaved by the whites in early times and someone watching it may reckon that it’s happening now and eventually starts protesting and ends up being rebellious. In conclusion, I firmly believe that to be able to understand the reports and the news on TVs and tabloids, it is important that the pictures are shown along with the words.
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Pictures
are
usually
attached to the
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news
stories on television or in tabloids. Several
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people
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think
that the images shown relate to the bulletin
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explain
the reports more
effectively
than the text. In my opinion, it is
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very
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hard
to
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understand
the whole situation
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just
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only
by the glimpse of a
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picture
or a video and the words
are required
to present the story to everyone.

Statements, written in the newspaper are
necessarily
required to
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explain
an incident or to convey a message to the readers
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but
, the
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pictures
in them self are not
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enough
to state the whole circumstance during,
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before
or after an
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event
.
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People
argue that the
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pictures
are sufficient to
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explain
everything and words are not needed to convey the
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news
, which
obviously
doesn’t seem to be appropriate.
For example
, the ongoing outbreak of
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corona virus
, if the
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government
needs to issue
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some
guidelines for the civilians in order to tackle the virus then, it would be difficult to instruct the civilians via the
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pictures
.
Hence
, the newspaper readers or the audiences watching
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Tv
either may not
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understand
the message or may
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understand
it
falsely
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so
, the
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pictures
alone are incomplete to
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explain
the
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news
and
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show
the
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details
hence
, the words
are required
.

Furthermore
,
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pictures
and statements matter a lot and
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tell
us everything
clearly
if together,
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but
if the TV and the Tabloids,
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start
using images
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only
for the bulletin then, it may mislead the public and may become the reason for the riots and other violence in the society.
For instance
, a
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picture
in the newspaper showing the black
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people
being enslaved
by the whites in early times and someone
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watching
it may reckon that it’s happening
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now
and
eventually
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starts
protesting and ends up being rebellious.

In conclusion
, I
firmly
believe that to be able to
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understand
the reports and the
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news
on TVs and tabloids, it is
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important
that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pictures
are shown
along with the words.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
326 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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