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Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.2

Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. v. 2
In recent years, a number of teachers aspiring jobs are doing a variety of teaching courses. Some people believe pursuing course is not as essential for becoming a successful educator, while I agree with those people who assert a teacher should complete basic educational programs and certain certifications before starting teaching to students. On the one hand, it could be argued that various ways such as workshops, training, and seminars are crucial for teachers to spread knowledge among students. Those people who support courses are not required to decide the capability of educators claims that experience worth than anything. Consequently, despite that many trainers owns various degrees and diploma, they mistreat their clients as well as due to lack of knowledge they often ruin the case of an individual. For an instance, one of the doctor from AIIMS, Delhi, was reported as mistreating with patient since he has done wrong surgery of an eye in spite of holding the MBBS degree. However, I believe that there are more arguments to suggest that doing the course is of paramount importance. One issue is that if, minimum criteria with courses would not settle than unnecessary people will also join the vacancies. Although experience covers everything in long term, I would argue that the certificates and degrees are must to become a successful professional. As a result, our nation will have more educated as well as a qualified trainer. To illustrate, in order to teach primary school students it is now mandatory to have B. Ed qualifications which impart strategical and best teaching patterns. Thus, it is clear how well-talented educators and faculties we can obtain from courses. To conclude, although it is undeniable that without courses educator can also become worthy someday, it has led to a mismatch in qualifications and assessment of best trainers. Therefore, I believe that pursuing a course or some other certifications brings improvements in teaching methods which contributes to making a suitable trainer with sound knowledge.
In recent years, a number of teachers aspiring jobs are doing a variety of
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teaching
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courses
.
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Some
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people
believe pursuing
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course
is not as essential for becoming a successful
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educator
, while I
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agree
with those
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people
who assert a teacher should complete basic educational programs and certain certifications
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before
starting
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teaching
to students.

On the one hand, it could
be argued
that various ways such as workshops, training, and seminars are crucial for teachers to spread knowledge among students. Those
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people
who support
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courses
are not required to decide the capability of
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educators
claims that experience
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worth
than anything.
Consequently
, despite that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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trainers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
various degrees and diploma, they mistreat their clients
as well
as due to lack of knowledge they
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often
ruin the case of an individual. For an instance, one of the doctor from
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AIIMS
, Delhi,
was reported
as mistreating with patient since he has done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
surgery of an eye
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
in spite of
holding the
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MBBS
degree.

However
, I believe that there are more arguments to suggest that doing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is of paramount importance. One issue is that if, minimum criteria with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
would not settle than unnecessary
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people
will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the vacancies. Although experience covers everything in long term, I would argue that the certificates and degrees are
After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use "must" or "have to" here.
must to
become a successful professional.
As a result
, our nation will have more educated
as well
as a qualified
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trainer
. To illustrate, in order to teach primary school students it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
mandatory to have B. Ed qualifications which impart strategical and best
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teaching
patterns.
Thus
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
how well-talented
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educators
and faculties we can obtain from courses.

To conclude
, although it is undeniable that without
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courses
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
educator
can
also
become worthy someday, it has led to a mismatch in qualifications and assessment
A determiner is probably missing here: "of the best".
of best
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trainers
.
Therefore
, I believe that pursuing a
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course
or
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
other certifications brings improvements in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
teaching
methods which contributes to making a suitable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trainer
with sound knowledge.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people feel that courses can make anyone a teacher, while others feel an excellent teacher cannot be made by pursuing a course. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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