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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life? v.7

Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life? v. 7
These days academic proficiency, considered by the many, acts as an effective tool to attain success of a person. However, there is little doubt that existence of the real heroes in many industries with low level education has already proved the fact that theoretical knowledge is only a part and parcel of life achievements not the sole one. In this context, it becomes ever so pertinent to discuss the cause that lie behind the proliferation of such phenomenon and the imperative requirements that undeniably lead to the prosperity of an individual. The major force at play here which causes and accentuates more success rate of people with less academic qualifications is nothing but the exposure rate of such community to the social life than normal school going children. Generally, the old fashioned and outdated educational strategies which is most likely prepared for the industrial jobs hardly assist children so as to solve practical, real life problems. Students who fail in school curriculum, on the other hand, acquire certain life skills like problem-solving, leadership, good communication and so on, and with which they achieve personal as well as professional life. There are many students with innate ability in extracurricular activities most probably quit their academic life and follow their passions and retain success rate in life all because of the boring schooling that only follows factual curriculum. However, there are many research studies have already came in front line to notify the authorities regarding the positive correlation between economic independence and dedication, hard work and perseverance. To attain success ahead, one has to realise or rectify his or her potentials as those are the extremely powerful tool in this Competitive world. This can be done only by letting a child into the social life under good supervision of either the parents or the teachers. Sachin Tendulkar, a renowned cricket player, has succeeded his career through complete focus and determination on the goal, and of course stands as a testimony here that symbolises non academic requirements and diligent efforts are pivotal behind being successful. To conclude, I reiterate the fact that academic qualification will certainly improve a person’s chances of achieving success but it is not a pre-requisite. In fact, success is actually a byproduct of hard work and perseverance
These days
academic
proficiency, considered by the
many
, acts as an effective tool to attain
success
of a person.
However
, there is
little
doubt that existence of the real heroes in
many
industries with low level education has already proved the fact that theoretical knowledge is
only
a part and parcel of
life
achievements not the sole one. In this context, it becomes ever
so
pertinent to discuss the cause that lie behind the proliferation of such phenomenon and the imperative requirements that
undeniably
lead to the prosperity of an individual.

The major force at play here which causes and accentuates more
success
rate of
people
with less
academic
qualifications is nothing
but
the exposure rate of such community to the social
life
than normal school going children.
Generally
, the
old fashioned
and outdated educational strategies which is most likely prepared for the industrial jobs hardly assist children
so as to
solve practical, real
life
problems. Students who fail in school curriculum,
on the other hand
, acquire certain
life
skills
like problem-solving, leadership,
good
communication and
so
on, and with which they achieve personal
as well
as professional
life
. There are
many
students with innate ability in extracurricular activities most
probably
quit their
academic
life
and follow their passions and retain
success
rate in
life
all
because
of the boring schooling that
only
follows factual curriculum.

However
, there are
many
research studies have already
came
in front line to notify the authorities regarding the
positive
correlation between economic independence and dedication,
hard
work and perseverance. To attain
success
ahead, one
has to
realise
or rectify
his or her
potentials as those are the
extremely
powerful tool in this Competitive world. This can
be done
only
by letting a child into the social
life
under
good
supervision of either the parents or the teachers.
Sachin
Tendulkar
, a renowned cricket player, has succeeded his career through complete focus and determination on the goal, and
of course
stands as a testimony here that
symbolises
non
academic
requirements and diligent efforts are pivotal behind being successful.

To conclude
, I reiterate the fact that
academic
qualification will
certainly
improve
a person’s chances of achieving
success
but
it is not a
pre-requisite
. In fact,
success
is actually a byproduct of
hard
work and
perseverance
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is most important thing to succeed in life? v. 7

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377 words
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