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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this case? What is the most important thing to success in life? v.6

Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this case? What is the most important thing to success in life? v. 6
There are several individuals who failed in school and become eminent and successful personalities around the world. The life of all those people provide the knowledge that being a failure in childhood does not matter with the rest of life. The essay will discuss the reasons why they become a success in their life and what is the significant quality need to achieve progress in life. To begin with, most of the individuals who become backward or failure during the school period is due to the lack of voluntary or involuntary support. Hence, if these people find any opportunity to encourage themselves the use it wisely without wasting time to accomplish their life goals. For instant, many famous persons like APJ Abdul Kalam and Abraham Lincoln followed a poor family background and also, they were not smart in their childhood. But they work the heart with a great ambition to win the failures of life and obtain victory. therefore, the major reasons are accepting the falls of life and working hard makes a man successful in life. Moreover, one of the important quality A person should need to success is the positive attitude towards the life. Every individual facing hardship on a period of life, and the one who takes all the difficulties with a positive manner should stay strong to overcome failure. For example, if a person blame themselves and others for the happiness of life does not gain any progress due to the negativity. To conclude, to become a successful individual in life people should use their opportunities and work hard with a positive attitude towards the life.
There are several
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individuals
who failed in school and
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eminent and successful personalities around the world. The
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life
of all those
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people
provide the knowledge that being a
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failure
in childhood does not matter with the rest of
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life
. The essay will discuss the reasons why they
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become
a success in their
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life
and what is the significant quality need to achieve progress in life.

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with, most of the
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who
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backward or
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failure
during the school period is due to the lack of voluntary or involuntary support.
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people
find any opportunity to encourage themselves the
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it
wisely
without wasting time to accomplish their
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life
goals. For instant,
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persons like APJ Abdul
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and Abraham Lincoln followed a poor family background and
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, they were not smart in their childhood.
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they work the heart with a great ambition to win the
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of
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and obtain victory.
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life
and working
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makes
a
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man
successful in life.

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, one of the
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quality A person should need to success is the
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positive
attitude towards the
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life
. Every
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individual
facing hardship on a period of
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life
, and the one who takes all the difficulties with a
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positive
manner should stay strong to overcome
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failure
.
For example
, if a person blame themselves
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and others
for the happiness of
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does not gain any progress due to the negativity.

To conclude
, to
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a successful
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in
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life
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people
should
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use
their opportunities and work
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with a
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attitude towards the
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life
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9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this case? What is the most important thing to success in life? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
270 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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