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some people donot enjoy shopping and shop only when they have a specific purchase to make. Others like to go shopping for a pleasure whether or not they have something to buy. v.1

some people donot enjoy shopping and shop only when they have a specific purchase to make. Others like to go shopping for a pleasure whether or not they have something to buy. v. 1
Careers can be flourished if someone is getting good job of influencing the interviewer in the first place. Most of the people believe that by performing well in interviews is the turning point in order to secure an employment. In my opinion, facing an interview with great confidence and giving best can lead to secure the job. However, there are other important aspects which really matter such as an educational background, work experience and skills etc. It is commonly believed that, the first impression really matters while facing an interview, then conversing with an interviewer decides why someone will get the job? An interview is mode of an evaluation of the candidate’s credentials and how he or she reacts to the questions. For example, in an interview most of the time candidates might ask to solve any task related to their field, and if they failed to provide solutions or explanation they might reject. That’s why performance in the interview really plays a vital role in getting the job. However, this is partially true; sometimes an interviewer may interested about the candidate’s potential and how they can be useful as an employee in order to join an organization. Candidate’s education, soft skills, certification and work experience are also considered instead of performance in interview. For example, Japanese all organizations hire an employee on the basis of their potential, educational credentials, work history and skills rather than just an interview performance. Otherwise, it will be can of worms for the employer while getting work from a new employee. To conclude, in my opinion, first impressions and giving your best in the interviews is so important but, at the end of the day, education, work history and skills really considered as key facts during the recruitment process.
Careers can
be flourished
if someone is getting
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good
job of influencing the interviewer in the
first
place. Most of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that by performing well in
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interviews
is the turning point in order to secure an employment. In my opinion, facing an
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interview
with great confidence and giving best can lead to secure the job.
However
, there are other
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important
aspects which
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really
matter such as an educational background,
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work
experience and
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skills
etc.

It is
commonly
believed that, the
first
impression
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really
matters while facing an
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interview
, then conversing with an interviewer decides why someone will
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get
the job? An
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interview
is mode of an evaluation of the
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candidate’s
credentials and how he or she reacts to the questions.
For example
, in an
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interview
most of the time
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candidates
might ask to solve any task related to their field, and if they failed to provide solutions or explanation they might reject. That’s why performance in the
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interview
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really
plays a vital role in getting the job.

However
, this is
partially
true;
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sometimes
an interviewer may interested about the
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candidate’s
potential and how they can be useful as an employee in order to
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join
an organization.
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Candidate’s
education, soft
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skills
, certification and
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work
experience are
also
considered
instead
of performance in
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interview
.
For example
, Japanese all organizations hire an employee on the basis of their potential, educational credentials,
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work
history and
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skills
rather
than
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just
an
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interview
performance.
Otherwise
, it will be
Consider using a past participle here: "canned".
can
of worms for the employer while getting
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work
from a new employee.

To conclude
, in my opinion,
first
impressions and giving your best in the
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interviews
is
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so
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important
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but
, at the
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end
of the day, education,
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work
history and
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skills
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really
considered as key facts during the recruitment process.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay some people donot enjoy shopping and shop only when they have a specific purchase to make. Others like to go shopping for a pleasure whether or not they have something to buy. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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