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Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment Do you agree or disagree? v.1

Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment v. 1
Planning and preparing for the future is one of the most important traits of the human psyche. We have been taught how to plan for the future in all business schools across the world. However, a view has been surfacing every now and then that we need to learn to stay in the present. My inclination falls in line with this view There are numerous reasons why I believe that living in the moment is true living. Firstly, living in the present moment is absolutely stressed and tension free. Those who live in the present can enjoy and experience the moment so well that they are attuned to the right flow of life and such flow almost always leads them to right future. It is a fact that humans do not have control over nature, and so, we should leave the journey of the life to the fullest. But, we keep planning for the future, which brings insecurity, stress and fear in all of us. It is rightly said by the spiritual mystics that living in the future brings in fear Finally, living in the present always makes people accept the things as they are. Such acceptance is essential if we need happy and a healthy life. I have experienced that constant endeavour to plan for the future creates a feeling of non-acceptance of the present and if we reject the present, we simply cannot have a better future. On the other hand, safeguarding the future is a notion that is widely accepted across the globe. I personally see nothing wrong with it. We ought to have goals and plans for the future. But, we must work and live in the now to let these plans manifest. Conclusively, I firmly believe that having a future strategy is not bad, but, even to live up to that proposed projection, we must live in the present. Thus, I agree that living in the present moment is the best way of living one's life
Planning and preparing for the
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future
is one of the most
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important
traits of the human psyche. We have
been taught
how to
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plan
for the
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future
in all business schools across the world.
However
, a view has been surfacing every
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now
and then that we need to learn to stay in the
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present
. My inclination falls in line with this
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view


There are numerous reasons why I believe that
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living
in the
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moment
is true
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living
.
Firstly
,
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living
in the
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present
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moment
is
absolutely
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stressed
and tension free. Those who
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live
in the
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present
can enjoy and experience the
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moment
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so
well that they
are attuned
to the right flow of
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life
and such flow almost always leads them to right
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future
. It is a fact that humans do not have control over nature, and
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so
, we should
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leave
the journey of the
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life
to the fullest.
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But
, we
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keep
planning for the
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future
, which brings insecurity,
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stress
and fear in all of us. It is
rightly
said by the spiritual mystics that
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living
in the
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future
brings in
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fear


Finally
,
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living
in the
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present
always
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makes
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people
accept the things as they are. Such acceptance is essential if we need happy and a healthy
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life
. I have experienced that constant
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endeavour
to
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plan
for the
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future
creates a feeling of non-acceptance of the
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present
and if we reject the
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present
, we
simply
cannot have a better future.

On the other hand
, safeguarding the
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future
is a notion
that is
widely
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accepted
across the globe. I
personally
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see
nothing
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wrong
with it. We ought to have goals and
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plans
for the
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future
.
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But
, we
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must
work and
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live
in the
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now
to
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let
these
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plans
manifest.

Conclusively
, I
firmly
believe that having a
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future
strategy is not
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bad
,
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but
, even to
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live
up to that proposed projection, we
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must
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live
in the
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present
.
Thus
, I
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agree
that
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living
in the
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present
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moment
is the best way of
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living
one's
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life
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be waste of time. they argue that people should simply live in the moment v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
330 words
6
Overall Band Score
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