We are all keen on visiting historical and artistic objects wherever possible although the impact of direct viewing has been recently challenged by some people. I strongly believe that remote viewing of such valuable items merely through computers cannot be a practical proposition, and I will outline the reasons in this essay.
To begin with, the museums and art galleries have been seemed to be more beneficial than virtual tours to impart multifaceted knowledge about various realms, ranging from historical and traditional to scientific and social topics. A historical object displayed in a museum can disclose a wealth of information regarding the social conventions and cultural contexts, especially when specialists are invited to lecture regularly about them. Whereas computers may not be able to easily convey such the whole collected information only through a picture.
Furthermore, many historical specimen and artworks have long been maintained in galleries to preserve local cultural identity and tradition which handed down between generations. With the ever-rising using of new technology and computers, many museums and galleries may have to close which is absolutely a potential menace for cultural conservation.
Of course, some may argue that social networks and computers have provided us with a great opportunity to travel throughout history and time to visit not only local historical and artistic collections, but also we can browse for international, historical crafts and items gathered in foreign museums. However, it can never be compared with the human experience of observing them personally.
In conclusion, I believe that museums and galleries are essential for each country to preserve their cultural heritage and present educational exhibitions for visitors which seems to be hardly achieved by computer-based information.
We are all keen on visiting
historical
and artistic objects wherever possible although the impact of direct viewing has been recently challenged by
some
people
. I
strongly
believe that remote viewing of such valuable items
merely
through computers cannot be a practical proposition, and I will outline the reasons in this essay.
To
begin
with, the
museums
and art
galleries
have
been seemed
to be more beneficial than virtual tours to impart multifaceted knowledge about various realms, ranging from
historical
and traditional to scientific and social topics. A
historical
object displayed in a
museum
can disclose a wealth of information regarding the social conventions and
cultural
contexts,
especially
when specialists
are invited
to lecture
regularly
about them.
Whereas
computers may not be able to
easily
convey such the whole collected information
only
through a picture.
Furthermore
,
many
historical
specimen and artworks have long
been maintained
in
galleries
to preserve local
cultural
identity and tradition which handed down between generations. With the ever-rising using of new technology and computers,
many
museums
and
galleries
may
have to
close which is
absolutely
a potential menace for
cultural
conservation.
Of course
,
some
may argue that social networks and computers have provided us with a great opportunity to travel throughout history and time to visit not
only
local
historical
and artistic collections,
but
also
we can browse for international,
historical
crafts and items gathered in foreign
museums
.
However
, it can never
be compared
with the human experience of observing them
personally
.
In conclusion
, I believe that
museums
and
galleries
are essential for each country to preserve their
cultural
heritage and present educational exhibitions for visitors which seems to be hardly achieved by computer-based information.
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