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Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.1

Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 1
With the growing population, the problem of pollution is also increasing at a rapid rate. If nothing will be done soon, our future generations would not be able to live in this environment. It is in our hands only to protect the it. In order to do that, the first thing where people can help is recycling the waste products. A lot of products that we use can be recycled. For example, avoid using single use plastics. Use recyclable boxes. Use steel straws instead of plastic ones. Another example would be to carry your own recyclable bag for grocery shopping, instead of asking a new plastic bag at the grocery store. Not only this step is saving the environment, but also saving the money of people which they were spending on these bags every time. Quite significant contributions can be done at the individual level, but it would be great if the government imposes some legal requirements also. Then people will be more disciplined to save their environment. Government can impose legal requirements. For instance, already the plastic bags have been made chargeable at the grocery stores, which has helped in making people carry their own recyclable bags instead of asking for a new plastic bag every time. This step has greatly helped in limiting the use of plastic bags. More such steps can be taken in the future. For example, imposing fine for houses generating more non recyclable waste per month. It can be measured on the monthly basis, and if it crosses a particular limit, a fine can be imposed. Such restrictions can be imposed, but too much of legal restrictions can make people cranky and it will affect their personal harmony. In conclusion, according to me legal requirements can definitely help. But it should be the person's own responsibility, to take care of the environment. If we ourselves are taking care of it, then no such legal restrictions would be needed.
With the growing population, the problem of pollution is
also
increasing at a rapid rate. If nothing will
be done
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soon
, our future generations would not be able to
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live
in this environment. It is in our hands
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only
to protect
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the it
. In order to do that, the
first
thing where
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people
can
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help
is recycling the waste products.

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A lot of
products that we
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use
can
be recycled
.
For example
, avoid using single
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use
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plastics
.
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Use
recyclable boxes.
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Use
steel straws
instead
of
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plastic
ones. Another example would be to carry your
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own
recyclable
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bag
for grocery shopping,
instead
of asking a new
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plastic
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bag
at the grocery store. Not
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only
this step is saving the environment,
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but
also
saving the money of
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people
which they were spending on these
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bags
every time. Quite significant contributions can
be done
at the individual level,
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but
it would be great if the
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government
imposes
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some
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legal
requirements
also
. Then
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people
will be more disciplined to save their environment.

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Government
can impose
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legal
requirements.
For instance
, already the
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plastic
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bags
have
been made
chargeable at the grocery stores, which has
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helped
in making
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people
carry their
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own
recyclable
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
instead
of asking for a new
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plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
every time. This step has
greatly
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helped
in limiting the
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use
of
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plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
. More such steps can
be taken
in the future.
For example
, imposing fine for
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houses
generating more
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non recyclable
waste per month. It can
be measured
on the monthly basis, and if it crosses a particular limit, a fine can
be imposed
. Such restrictions can
be imposed
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
too much of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
legal
restrictions can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
cranky and it will affect their personal harmony.

In conclusion
, according to me
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
legal
requirements can definitely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
it should be the person's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
responsibility, to take care of the environment. If we ourselves are taking care of it, then no such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
legal
restrictions would
be needed
.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
324 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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