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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.6

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 6
It is true that we do not recycle enough of our household waste. Although I accept that new legislation to force people to recycle could help this situation, I do not agree that a recycling law is the only measure that governments should take. In my opinion, a new recycling law would be just one possible way to tackle the problem. Governments could make it a legal obligation for householders to separate all waste into different bins. There could be punishments for people who fail to comply with the law, ranging from a small fine to community service, or even perhaps prison sentences for the repeated breach. These measures would encourage people to obey the recycling law. As a result, the improved behaviours of the householders could lead a cleaner, waste-free environment. However, I believe that the governments should do more than introducing a recycling law. It might be more effective if politicians put education, rather than punishment, at the centre of a recycling campaign. For example, children could be taught about recycling in schools, and householders could be informed about the environmental impact of not recycling. Another tactic governments could use would be to create stricter regulations for the companies that produce the packaging for products. Finally, the money could also be spent to improve recycling facilities and systems, so that waste is processed more effectively, regardless of whether or not people separate it correctly. In summary, perhaps we do need to make recycling a legal requirement, but this would certainly not be the only way to encourage people to dispose(elden çıkarmak) of their waste more responsibly.
It is true that we do not recycle
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enough
of our household
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waste
. Although I accept that new legislation to force
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people
to recycle could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
this situation, I do not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that a
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recycling
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law
is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
measure that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
should take.

In my opinion, a new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
one possible way to tackle the problem.
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Governments
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it a legal obligation for householders to separate all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
into
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
bins. There could be punishments for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who fail to comply with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
, ranging from a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
fine to community service, or even perhaps prison sentences for the repeated breach. These measures would encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to obey the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
.
As a result
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
Possible spelling mistake. 'behaviours' is British English.
behaviours
of the householders could lead a cleaner, waste-free environment.

However
, I believe that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
should do more than introducing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
. It might be more effective if politicians put education,
rather
than punishment, at the
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
of a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
campaign.
For example
, children could
be taught
about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
in schools, and householders could
be informed
about the environmental impact of not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
. Another tactic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
would be to create stricter regulations for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
that produce the packaging for products.
Finally
, the money could
also
be spent
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
facilities and systems,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
is processed
more
effectively
, regardless of
Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
whether or not
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people
separate it
correctly
.

In summary, perhaps we do need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
a legal requirement,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
this would
certainly
not be the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
way to encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to dispose(
Possible spelling mistake found.
elden
Possible spelling mistake found.
çıkarmak
) of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
more
responsibly
.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
268 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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