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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.5

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 5
The practice of home recycling is inadequate. Some people believe that government should impose legal actions about waste management. In this essay, I will provide reasons and examples why laws should be implemented to increase recycling rate. Waste disposal is a very common problem around the globe. Some people don’t have enough knowledge about waste management which includes segregation and recycling. For example, in some remote areas, people don’t know how to recognize biodegradable from a non biodegradable materials which results to mixed up of waste products. Furthermore, some do not know that you can save money by recycling things. That is why the government should provide laws and programs about waste management to let people know the benefits that they can get from it. Another reason is stubbornness. Human beings will not bother to segregate their waste unless a legal law is implemented. For instance, the government of Singapore imposed a law about proper waste disposal and waste management. Singaporeans started to recycle and segregate their waste and in a short span of time their country has been considered as one of the cleanest countries in the world. Through implementation of a law and giving a sanction to any person who violate it, humans will surely abide on it. In my conclusion, a law is very important to discipline and teach people to recycle and segregate their waste materials. However, programs and hands- on trainings must also be implemented to educate people about the importance of recycling and proper waste management.
The practice of home
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recycling
is inadequate.
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Some
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people
believe that
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government
should impose legal actions about
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waste
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management
. In this essay, I will provide reasons and examples why
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laws
should
be implemented
to increase
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recycling
rate.

Waste disposal is a
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very
common problem around the globe.
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Some
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people
don’t have
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enough
knowledge about
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waste
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management
which includes segregation and
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recycling
.
For example
, in
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some
remote areas,
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people
don’t know how to recognize biodegradable from a
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non biodegradable
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materials
which results to mixed up of
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waste
products.
Furthermore
,
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some
do not know that you can save money by
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recycling
things.
That is
why the
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government
should provide
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laws
and programs about
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waste
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management
to
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let
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people
know the benefits that they can
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get
from it.

Another reason is stubbornness. Human beings will not bother to segregate their
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waste
unless a legal
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law
is implemented
.
For instance
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
of Singapore imposed a
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law
about proper
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waste
disposal and
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waste
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management
. Singaporeans
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started
to recycle and segregate their
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waste
and in a short span of time their country has
been considered
as one of the cleanest countries in the world. Through implementation of a
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law
and giving a sanction to any person who violate it, humans will
surely
abide on it.

In my conclusion, a
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law
is
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very
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important
to discipline and teach
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people
to recycle and segregate their
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waste
materials.
However
, programs and hands- on trainings
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must
also
be implemented
to educate
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people
about the importance of
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recycling
and proper
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waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
management
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
252 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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