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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. v.3

Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? v. 3
To be a superstar the media plays a vital role in the industry, which has many pros and cons hidden. Some people believe that the famous people get the best benefit of the media, whereas, many people feel that it actually hampers their personal life. This essay will discuss about both the views and my opinion over this. Actors, sports person, leaders and other famous personalities are always in the media. Every reporter wants to cover their every move and views, and want it to telecast first on their channels to get more TRPs. According to the channels requirement, they telecast those scenes which looks apt to them. Nevertheless, knowing about the reality, they easily change and even edit the recordings and create a new meaning out of it. Therefore, it not only deteriorates the carrier of the celebrities and even create controversies against them. The life's of the superstars are full of every single person who wants to know about their personal life and follow whatever trend they are following. But somewhere people forget that they are humans too, and they have a right to get a personal space from the fame and filmy world. Every celebrity has their own personal space and a different lifestyle, friends and family. In my opinion the public, as well as the media should understand the value of this personal space, because continuous coverage of media will only create a sort of interference in their life. To conclude, the media industry should be fair with the lives of the superstars. Instead of acting selfish and paraphrasing the reality, they should show the reality to their fans. In addition, they should understand that fame only standstill the platform they are working on, and the money they are getting paid for is not to showcase their personal life's to the general public. Therefore, they should respect their personal space and not follow them where ever they are going.
To be a superstar the
media
plays a vital role in the industry, which has
many
pros and cons hidden.
Some
people
believe that the
famous
people
get
the best benefit of the
media
, whereas,
many
people
feel that it actually hampers their
personal
life. This essay will
discuss about both
the views and my opinion over this.

Actors, sports person, leaders and other
famous
personalities are always in the
media
. Every reporter wants to cover their every
move
and views, and want it to telecast
first
on their channels to
get
more
TRPs
. According to the
channels
requirement, they telecast those scenes which looks apt to them.
Nevertheless
, knowing about the reality, they
easily
change
and even edit the recordings and create a new meaning out of it.
Therefore
, it not
only
deteriorates the carrier of the celebrities and even create controversies against them.

The life's of the superstars are full of every single person who wants to know about their
personal
life and follow whatever trend they are following.
But
somewhere
people
forget that they are humans too, and they have a right to
get
a
personal
space
from the fame and filmy world. Every celebrity has
their
own
personal
space
and a
different
lifestyle, friends and family. In my opinion the public,
as well
as the
media
should understand the value of this
personal
space
,
because
continuous coverage of
media
will
only
create a sort of interference in their life.

To conclude
, the
media
industry should be
fair
with the
lives
of the superstars.
Instead
of acting selfish and paraphrasing the reality, they should
show
the reality to their fans.
In addition
, they should understand that fame
only
standstill the platform they are working on, and the money they are getting paid for is not to showcase their
personal
life's to the
general public
.
Therefore
, they should respect their
personal
space
and not follow them where ever they are going.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
6
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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