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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their was v.37

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 37
Recycling wastes produced at home may not been done enough according to some people, reason why they think governments should make it a legal requirement. In my opinion, I do believe that there is a need to establish laws to encourage recycling in households in order to foster the waste segregation, but there is also needed local government laws to oblige them to build specific places to where the different type of wastes are sent instead of the landfill. On one hand, waste segregation laws could be argue because some governments do not offer any segregated transportation for them, so it would not have sense to collect the garbage and transport it to the landfill as a final disposal. However, these type of legislation would be useful to establish it in places where people do not have the culture of recycling. In Cali, for example, where citizens usually pack their wastes in plastic bags without caring for separating the trash by colors. Hence, laws would help regulate this aspect of the solid waste management system and to increase the amount of waste recycled as well. On the other hand, building waste facilities besides landfills would certainly increase the trash that is collected in cities or communities in general; therefore, local governments’ laws are also significant because they would require the administration of the cities to offer technology for waste recovery after collecting the segregated trash from the households. For instance, organized countries that have environmental issues as a foremost factor of their development, have a complete structure to ensure a well waste management such technological parks where trash are converted into different products or even supplies for industries. To conclude, I believe laws are necessary to improve the recycling activity at home, because these would help people segregate the wastes and would also have the governments to work for their local needs related to waste management by offering an accurate treatment instead of final disposal of useful wastes.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Recycling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
produced at home may not
been done
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
according to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
, reason why they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
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governments
should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
it a legal requirement. In my opinion, I do believe that there is a need to establish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
to encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
in households in order to foster the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
segregation,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
there is
also
needed local
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government
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
to oblige them to build specific places to where the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
instead
of the landfill.

On one hand,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
segregation
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
could be
Consider using the past participle "argued"?
argue
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
do not offer any segregated transportation for them,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it would not have sense to collect the garbage and transport it to the landfill as a final disposal.
However
, these type of legislation would be useful to establish it in places where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
do not have the culture of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
. In Cali,
for example
, where citizens
usually
pack their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
in plastic bags without caring for separating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
by colors.
Hence
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
regulate this aspect of the solid
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management system and to increase the amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
recycled
as well
.

On the other hand
, building
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
facilities
besides
landfills would
certainly
increase the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
that
is collected
in cities or communities
in general
;
therefore
, local
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
are
also
significant
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they would require the administration of the cities to offer technology for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
recovery after collecting the segregated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
from the households.
For instance
, organized countries that have environmental issues as a foremost factor of their development, have a complete structure to ensure a well
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management such technological parks where
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trash
are converted
into
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
products or even supplies for industries.

To conclude
, I believe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
are necessary to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
activity at home,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
these would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
segregate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
and would
also
have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
to work for their local needs related to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
management by offering an accurate treatment
instead
of final disposal of useful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 37

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
328 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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