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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? v.5

In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? v. 5
As compared to the past decade; it has been observed that trend of staying as a tenant has increased in many parts of the world. Some people find it comfortable to stay as a tenant; whereas others like to own the property they reside at. Advantages of owing the house certainly outweighs the advantages of living as a tenant. I shall discuss this phenomenon in more detail with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs. To begin with, one of the most important benefit of being a house owner is the assurance of financial stability. By owing the house, it means that person is financially sound. Furthermore, there is no interference of landlord and privacy is well maintained. Owner can renovate or do the maintenance as per their own desire at any given time. Thus, having an own house is super beneficial in many aspects. To elucidate it further, house is a valuable asset and it can be helpful in difficult circumstances. As house can be rented and it can become source of income. For instance, I live in a colony whereby people have owned 4-5 houses and their only income resource is payments of their tenants. Despite of innumerable advantages of being a house owner, there are certain advantages to live in a rented house that cannot be overlooked. It gives mobility liberty to the residents as they can move to another place easily without any issue of selling or closing down the house. What’s more, tenants doesn’t have to pay any expenses for house maintenance. To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that rational approach is to have own house. Benefits of this approach outweighs the advantages of living in a rented place. People should tend to build or purchase their own homes as it will not only save their money from monthly fare but will also be beneficial from investment perspective.
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been observed
that trend of staying as a
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tenant
has increased in
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many
parts of the world.
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people
find it comfortable to stay as a
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tenant
; whereas others like to
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own
the property they reside at.
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Advantages
of owing the
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house
certainly
outweighs the
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advantages
of living as a
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tenant
. I shall discuss this phenomenon in more detail with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, one of the most
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important
benefit of being a
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house
owner is the assurance of financial stability. By owing the
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house
, it means that person is
financially
sound.
Furthermore
, there is no interference of landlord and privacy is well maintained. Owner can renovate or do the maintenance as per their
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own
desire at any
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given
time.
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, having an
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own
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house
is super beneficial in
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many
aspects.

To elucidate it
further
,
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house
is a valuable asset and it can be helpful in difficult circumstances. As
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house
can
be rented
and it can become source of income.
For instance
, I
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live
in a colony whereby
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people
have
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owned
4-5
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houses
and their
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only
income resource is payments of their
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tenants
.
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innumerable
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advantages
of being a
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house
owner, there are certain
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advantages
to
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live
in a rented
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house
that cannot
be overlooked
. It gives mobility liberty to the residents as they can
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move
to another place
easily
without any issue of selling or closing down the
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house
. What’s more,
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tenants
doesn’t
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have to
pay any expenses for
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house
maintenance.

To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that rational approach is to have
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own
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house
. Benefits of this approach outweighs the
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advantages
of living in a rented place.
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should tend to build or
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purchase
their
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homes as it will not
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save their money from monthly fare
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will
also
be beneficial from investment perspective.
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IELTS essay In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
315 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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