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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.32

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 32
It has been an ongoing debate about how to deal with the increased garbage. Some people perceive that weather the rubbish that published in the home would be recycled is not enough so, the regime should take some disciplinary action to raise it. However, others think the authority should start awareness program. The essay will discuss my stance with arguments in below paragraphs. To begin with, the predominant reason is that population that has been growing drastically. The waste produced by these people will also be elaborated. To control this the governments should impose strict rules, which forces people to recycle rubbish and helps to create the cleanest city. Moreover, most of the manufacturing unit will dispose the water, which contains hazardous contaminates. If the government should not inculcate these rules, then this water will create a detrimental impact on the humans as well as animals. For example, research conducted shows that if any information is displayed on Tv everyone just listens to it not take any steps base on that, but if it is displayed in the form of rule then everyone tried to obey it. On the other hand, there are some people who things the authority should have to take precautionary steps rather than the law. Firstly, the regime can start an awareness program which delivers the information regarding waste and discuss what type of unfavourable situation it creates. Consequently, the governments should teach a lesson of this in all primary schools. Even this will also be explored by declaring prize to the person who is doing qualitative recycling work. For instance, India, in most of the preliminary school contains one subject which teaches the child some rules, even force them to work for the social community. In conclusion, if the government should impose the rules than everyone will follow it without any question, but the people start to follow any instruction only if they achieve something. As per my opinion, the authority should inculcate the straighten law to control the situation.
It has been an ongoing debate about how to deal with the increased garbage.
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Some
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people
perceive that weather the rubbish that published in the home would
be recycled
is not
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enough
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so
, the regime should take
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some
disciplinary action to raise it.
However
, others
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think
the authority should
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start
awareness program. The essay will discuss my stance with arguments in below paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, the predominant reason is that population that has been growing
drastically
. The waste produced by these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
will
also
be elaborated
. To control this the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
should impose strict
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rules
, which forces
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to recycle rubbish and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
to create the cleanest city.
Moreover
, most of the manufacturing unit will dispose the water, which contains hazardous contaminates. If the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should not inculcate these
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rules
, then this water will create a detrimental impact on the humans
as well
as animals.
For example
, research conducted
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that if any information
is displayed
on
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Tv
everyone
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just
listens to it not take any steps base on that,
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but
if it
is displayed
in the form of
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rule
then everyone tried to obey it.

On the other hand
, there are
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some
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people
who things the authority should
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have to
take precautionary steps
rather
than the law.
Firstly
, the regime can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
an awareness program which delivers the information regarding waste and discuss what type of
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unfavourable
situation it creates.
Consequently
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
should teach a lesson of this in all primary schools. Even this will
also
be explored
by declaring prize to the person who is doing qualitative recycling work.
For instance
, India, in most of the preliminary school contains one subject which teaches the child
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rules
, even force them to work for the social community.

In conclusion
, if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should impose the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rules
than everyone will follow it without any question,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to follow any instruction
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
if they achieve something. As per my opinion, the authority should inculcate
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'straighten' is correct. If 'straighten' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the straighten
law to control the situation.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 32

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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