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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.29

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 29
It is said by many, that the garbage produced by households is not recycled in a proper amount, therefore, it is argued, that by making it mandatory by law, this situation would improve. In this essay, I will explain why I believe that the government should take legal measures to ensure the recycling of waste in every house. Laws make things happen, it has been proven that people do not just do things correctly by nature and consequently there is not enough willpower or desire to help the Planet by recycling. On the other hand, if fines were applied to citizens that did not recycle, there would be much more people caring for this. In addition, making this a legal requirement, would make the system work as there would be not only specific buckets to put paper, plastic, organic waste and glass, but also the different types of waste would be sent to specific places to be treated and returned to society in diverse products such as fertilizers. Conversely, others believe that there is another strategy to make people recycle more, such as more environmental education at schools. Nevertheless, education is definitely not enough to make the society most considerate of the damage that the garbage produces. Take, for instance, nowadays streets are full of papers and plastic bags thrown by men and women daily. Evidently, people do not mind and laws are needed to make everybody aware of contamination and its solution. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that people need laws to behave correctly and to make things really happen. Therefore, the government is responsible for introducing these measures and making the society follow the rules to make a better place for everyone.
It
is said
by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
, that the garbage produced by households is not recycled in a proper amount,
therefore
, it
is argued
, that by making it mandatory by law, this situation would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
. In this essay, I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why I believe that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should take legal measures to ensure the recycling of waste in every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Laws
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
things happen, it has
been proven
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
do things
correctly
by nature and
consequently
there is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
willpower or desire to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the Planet by recycling.
On the other hand
, if fines
were applied
to citizens that did not recycle, there would be much more
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
caring for this.
In addition
, making this a legal requirement, would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the system work as there would be not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
specific buckets to put paper, plastic, organic waste and glass,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
also
the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
types of waste would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sent
to specific places to
be treated
and returned to society in diverse products such as fertilizers.

Conversely
, others believe that there is another strategy to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
recycle more, such as more environmental education at schools.
Nevertheless
, education is definitely not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
the society most considerate of the damage that the garbage produces. Take,
for instance
, nowadays streets are full of papers and plastic bags thrown by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
and women daily.
Evidently
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
do not mind and laws
are needed
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
everybody aware of contamination and its solution.

In conclusion
, I am of the opinion that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
need laws to behave
correctly
and to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
things
really
happen.
Therefore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
is responsible for introducing these measures and making the society follow the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
make
a better place for everyone.
8.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 29

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
8.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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