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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste v.27

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 27
It's argued by some people that the amount of recycled home wastes is not enough, they believe that governments should turn recycling into a legal requirement in order to increase it. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this, the responsibility of raising people's awareness of the importance of recycling lies upon governments. Making money and spending it is the main focus on wealthy people, they don't particularly care about the environment or the vitality of recycling. While people under the poverty line can't afford to care, they are obliged to only care about affording to put food on their tables. Therefore, governments must intervene. Firstly, awareness campaigns that discuss the impact of harmful products on the environment should be held by the government so that people would realize how recycling helps us protect the environment. Secondly, after convincing people of the essential role of recycling, governments should start imposing laws to motivate people to recycle their waste. For example, There should be a fine or a penalty if people threw their rubbish instead of reprocessing it. But, at the same time, recycling factories and services must be provided by the government, special bins should be distributed around cities for people to throw their litter in. Then, these bins would be collected by recycling companies and reprocessed. To conclude, even if governments succeeded in convincing people to put a little effort into recycling their garbage, there would still be a few minorities who do not care. Therefore, laws and regulations should be applied in this matter.
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some
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people
that the amount of recycled home wastes is not
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enough
, they believe that
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governments
should turn
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recycling
into a legal requirement in order to increase it. In my opinion, I
strongly
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agree
with this, the responsibility of raising
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people
's awareness of the importance of
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recycling
lies upon
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governments
.

Making money and spending it is the main focus on wealthy
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people
, they don't
particularly
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care
about the environment or the vitality of
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recycling
. While
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people
under the poverty line can't afford to
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care
, they
are obliged
to
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only
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care
about affording to put food on their tables.
Therefore
,
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governments
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must
intervene.
Firstly
, awareness campaigns that discuss the impact of harmful products on the environment should
be held
by the
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government
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so
that
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people
would realize how
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recycling
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helps
us protect the environment.

Secondly
, after convincing
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people
of the essential role of
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recycling
,
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governments
should
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start
imposing laws to motivate
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people
to recycle their waste.
For example
, There should be a fine or a penalty if
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people
threw their rubbish
instead
of reprocessing it.
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But
, at the same time,
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recycling
factories and services
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must
be provided
by the
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government
, special bins should
be distributed
around cities for
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people
to throw their litter in. Then, these bins would
be collected
by
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recycling
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companies
and reprocessed.

To conclude
, even if
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governments
succeeded in convincing
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people
to put a
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little
effort into
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recycling
their garbage, there would
still
be a few minorities who do not
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care
.
Therefore
, laws and regulations should
be applied
in this matter.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. 27

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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