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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.26

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 26
It is noted that the residential wastes are not recycled considerably. Therefore, many intellectuals perceive that the local regime should modify the legislation to raise the awareness of the recycling in the society. I partially agree with the above notion which might motivate all the sections of the community towards recycling and environmental concerns. To begin with, the predominant reason for the imparting a law is to integrate people from all the fraternity into the agenda of recycling. Momentarily, a layman is not enough aware about the impact of recycling on the environment and domestic economy. Consequently, it is a duty of the authority to guide the people towards the sustainable management of waste through recycling. For example, the rule for the recycling the residential waste will be mandatory for all. As a result, the utilisation of the natural resources could be minimized. Furthermore, some people may oppose such rigid step of the authority. But, by using effective communication channel the positive intention could be put forward. Although, initially people do not take this act seriously, the energetic bureaucracy will be a key factor to make such effort successful. Moreover, the people would realize the benefit of such practice later on and it becomes the routine for them to recycle the wastes. For instance, in Britain, the household waste recycling has become the part of their routine as a result the common citizen is also very concern about it. Thus, the government plays a crucial role to motivate the people for waste recycling. In conclusion, the need of the hour is to preserve the scares natural resources. Hence, the recycling of the waste of the houses should be raised with the help of a law making. Such practice will be lucrative not only to an individual, but also whole society will get the advantage.
It
is noted
that the residential
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wastes
are not recycled
considerably
.
Therefore
,
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many
intellectuals perceive that the local regime should modify the legislation to raise the awareness of the
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recycling
in the society. I
partially
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the above notion which might motivate all the sections of the community towards
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
and environmental concerns.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the predominant reason for the imparting a law is to integrate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
from all the fraternity into the agenda of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
Momentarily
, a layman is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
aware about the impact of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
on the environment and domestic economy.
Consequently
, it is a duty of the authority to guide the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
towards the sustainable management of
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waste
through
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
.
For example
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
for the
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recycling
the residential
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waste
will be mandatory for all.
As a result
, the
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utilisation
of the natural resources could
be minimized
.

Furthermore
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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people
may oppose such rigid step of the authority.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, by using effective communication channel the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
intention could
be put
forward. Although,
initially
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people
do not take this act
seriously
, the energetic bureaucracy will be a key factor to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
such effort successful.
Moreover
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
would realize the benefit of such practice later on and it becomes the routine for them to recycle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
wastes
.
For instance
, in Britain, the household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
has become the part of their routine
as a result
the common citizen is
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
concern about it.
Thus
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
plays a crucial role to motivate the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
recycling.

In conclusion
, the need of the hour is to preserve the scares natural resources.
Hence
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
should
be raised
with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of a law making. Such practice will be lucrative not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
to an individual,
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but
also
whole society will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the advantage.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 26

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
304 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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