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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.25

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 25
It has been an ongoing debate between the political leaders, what to do with a rising quantity of rubbish. Some people perceive that to reclaim only home rubbish is not enough, they wish the authority should impart the strengthen law which forces people to elaborate their recycling pattern. I strongly support this view as it delivers the healthy atmosphere. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in the below paragraphs. To begin with, there are many perks that have been achieved by the authority by imposing the straight legal action. The predominant reason is that there are various sectors which releasing a plethora amount of waste in a single day. So, only controlling the rubbish which generated during the house chores was not enough to manage this. Although, the waste generated by the manufacturing companies would also contains elements which are hazardous for the living entity health, by imposing this law they will inculcate the system which raise the recycling. For example, most of the chemical companies release the water after their production, which contains toxic as it would not be used for any task. So, the companies started to recycle this water and after purifying it would be released into any near agricultural area. Furthermore, the government should also get the benefits from this. By imposing the laws, the authority can collect fine from those who try to spoil this; will help them to collect money which would be used for the cleaning of a certain area. Taking this type of disciplinary action will also help to reduce the waste generated by the other organizations. As a result, these will provide the healthy life to the people who were living in the nearer part of the duping area of the urban. For instance, research conducted shows that most of the street of the cities are now cleaner compare to the past; this will deliver the fresh air to the citizen where they live a healthy life. In conclusion, the recycling of the home waste is not enough because there are various parts which produces the waste. This would only be controlled by the imposing the law by the government who gets the money as well as serve the society in a better way.
It has been an ongoing debate between the political leaders, what to do with a rising quantity of rubbish.
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Some
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people
perceive that to reclaim
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only
home rubbish is not
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enough
, they wish the authority should impart
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'strengthen' is correct. If 'strengthen' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the strengthen
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law
which forces
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to elaborate their recycling pattern. I
strongly
support this view as it delivers the healthy atmosphere. The essay will discuss above notion with arguments in the below paragraphs.

To
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begin
with, there are
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many
perks that have
been achieved
by the authority by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
imposing
the straight legal action. The predominant reason is that there are various sectors which releasing a plethora amount of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
in a single day.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
controlling the rubbish which generated during the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
chores was not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to manage this. Although, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
generated by the manufacturing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
would
also
The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: "contain"
contains
elements which are hazardous for the living entity health, by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
imposing
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
they will inculcate the system which raise the recycling.
For example
, most of the chemical
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
release the water after their production, which contains toxic as it would not be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for any task.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
to recycle this water and after purifying it would
be released
into any near agricultural area.

Furthermore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
the benefits from this. By
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
imposing
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
laws
, the authority can collect fine from those who try to spoil this; will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
them to collect money which would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for the cleaning of a certain area. Taking this type of disciplinary action will
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
generated by the other organizations.
As a result
, these will provide the healthy life to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who were living in the nearer part of the duping area of the urban.
For instance
, research conducted
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that most of the street of the cities are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
cleaner compare to the past; this will deliver the fresh air to the citizen where they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a healthy life.

In conclusion
, the recycling of the home
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
is not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there are various parts which produces the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. This would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
be controlled
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
imposing
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
the money
as well
as serve the society in a better way.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 25

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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