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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think are need to make people recycle more of their waste. v.20

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 20
It is true that the waste of residential areas in the waste is not recycled adequately so some people believe that governments should impose policies or rules to recycle more rubbish. I completely agree with sitting legal rules for recycling. There are a variety reasons why people should recycle their waste. First and foremost, recycling can help to reduce environmental pollution; the more the waste is recycled, the less pollution will be produced. Take slums in some cities which are more contaminated than other parts of a city. For example, it is often seen that slum's residents throw their litter around their homes, so slums usually are messier. Releasing the waste and rubbish on the ground also causes that trees cannot absorb water and nutrients, and even the leachate of waste will penetrate into the depths of the Earth and pollute underground water sources which humans use them as drinking water. On top of that, some sorts of the waste such as plastic and glass cannot decompose in the nature and will remain for many years, which are dangerous for animals and birds, mainly because they eat this trash as a food. However, the participation of a minority of people in recycling alone is not likely to decrease the volume of the waste because not all residents are willing to take part in such a method. So if governments introduce some legal rules, then it can be expected that most of the waste will be recycled. For example, preparing separated bins for different kinds of waste in each neighbourhood and obligate dwellers to separate their rubbish. Not only will this good way reduce garbage, but it also has Financial benefits for some poor people such as scavengers who make a living by collecting and selling recycled rubbish to recycling factories. In conclusion, it seems to me that governments can create a sense of responsibility among people by imposing legal obligations to recycle their waste more. With these rules people will feel a sense of duty.
It is true that the
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waste
of residential areas in the
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waste
is not
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recycled
adequately
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so
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some
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people
believe that
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governments
should impose policies or
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rules
to recycle more
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rubbish
. I completely
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agree
with sitting legal
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rules
for recycling.

There are a variety reasons why
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people
should recycle their
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waste
.
First
and foremost, recycling can
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help
to
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reduce
environmental pollution; the more the
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waste
is
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recycled
, the less pollution will
be produced
. Take slums in
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some
cities which are more contaminated than other parts of a city.
For example
, it is
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often
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seen
that slum's residents throw their litter around their homes,
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so
slums
usually
are messier. Releasing the
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waste
and
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rubbish
on the ground
also
causes that trees cannot absorb water and nutrients, and even the leachate of
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waste
will penetrate into the depths of the Earth and pollute underground water sources which humans
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use
them as drinking water.
On top of that
,
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some
sorts of the
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waste
such as plastic and glass cannot decompose in the nature and will remain for
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many
years, which are
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dangerous
for animals and birds,
mainly
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because
they eat this trash as
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "food".
a food
.

However
, the participation of a minority of
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people
in recycling alone is not likely to decrease the volume of the
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waste
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because
not all residents are willing to
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take part
in such a method.
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So
if
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governments
introduce
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some
legal
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rules
, then it can be
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expected
that most of the
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waste
will be
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recycled
.
For example
, preparing separated bins for
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different
kinds of
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waste
in each
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neighbourhood
and obligate dwellers to separate their
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rubbish
. Not
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only
will this
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good
way
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reduce
garbage,
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but
it
also
has Financial benefits for
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some
poor
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people
such as scavengers who
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make
a living by collecting and selling
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recycled
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rubbish
to recycling factories.

In conclusion
, it seems to me that
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governments
can create a sense of responsibility among
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people
by imposing legal obligations to recycle their
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waste
more. With these
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rules
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people
will feel a sense of duty.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 20

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
335 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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