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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increased recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.2

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increased recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 2
Recycling is precious to save the environment. Garbage from houses go to dumping grounds instead of reusing it as the recyclable material. However, few in society believes that the government should introduce a law to make the best use of reusable garbage. I agree and elucidate with this opinion in the following paragraphs. To embark upon, the foremost reason behind sky touching dumping grounds is that individuals are not reprocessing the waste. In spite of saving the material for other use people throw it into garbage bins. For example, plastic bottles can be used as a pot for plants or to store small items, which can also save money. Thus, recovering and recycling would not only save the money of a person but also save the environment from getting it more polluted. Furthermore, awareness is also crucial to make individuals realize the importance of salvage. In addition, the number of strict rules should be introduced by the government so that society should start storing the usable material. The government conducted a campaign, which introduced rewards for saving the reprocess able items and maximum people earned attractive rewards; defaulters are marked with a penalty. Hence, mankind would start following the rules to protect themselves from fine; this will help in reduction of dump. In conclusion, humans should start saving the things which are reusable instead of throwing them. Moreover, the government should also take appropriate steps towards the enhanced usage of waste material. It would help in diminishing the garbage and enlarge the beauty of nature.
Recycling is precious to
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save
the environment. Garbage from
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houses
go to dumping grounds
instead
of reusing it as the recyclable
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material
.
However
, few in society believes that the
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government
should introduce a law to
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make
the best
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use
of reusable garbage. I
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agree
and elucidate with this opinion in the following paragraphs.

To embark upon, the foremost reason behind sky touching dumping grounds is that individuals are not reprocessing the waste.
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In spite of
saving the
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material
for other
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use
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people
throw it into garbage bins.
For example
, plastic bottles can be
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used
as a pot for plants or to store
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small
items, which can
also
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save
money.
Thus
, recovering and recycling would not
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only
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save
the money of a person
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but
also
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save
the environment from getting it more polluted.

Furthermore
, awareness is
also
crucial to
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make
individuals realize the importance of salvage.
In addition
, the number of strict
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rules
should
be introduced
by the
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government
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so
that society should
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start
storing the usable
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material
. The
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government
conducted a campaign, which introduced rewards for saving
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the reprocess
able items and maximum
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people
earned attractive rewards; defaulters
are marked
with a penalty.
Hence
, mankind would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
following the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
to protect themselves from fine; this will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in reduction of dump.

In conclusion
, humans should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
saving the things which are reusable
instead
of throwing them.
Moreover
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
should
also
take appropriate steps towards the enhanced usage of waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
. It would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
in diminishing the garbage and enlarge the beauty of nature.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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Alan Moore

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increased recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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