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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.9

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. v. 9
, Nowadays, waste material becomes astrenuous problem as well as rampant all over the world. The section of society does not like to reuse the waste material at home. It is reckoned that usage of material is a legal requirement that will helpful for multitudes and hashed out before embarking on viewpoints in subsequent 9paragraphs. To commence with, in todays scenario, individuals like to buy new things and they do not want to recycle the old things that are wasted. Such as plastic utensils or other things that are broken masses garbage that things which are not degraded and cause air as well soil pollution. Thus multitudes have the reuse that material as a craft and to make the new things that will fruitful at home. Moreover, usage of water can be reused like when water is used for washing clothes, then waste water can be collected in a container and use to wash toilets and floors and it is an intellectual way to reuse water. Furthermore, the government also should make some laws to recycle the waste material at a house for the people. Firstly disposal things might be banned because these and not reusable and generate diseases because it is non biodegradable then inhabitants face problems. Secondly separate dustbins have been available in the streets that can be used for waste material that can be used. For instance, waste food that will give to the animals as well other things that would be given to the poor people. To conclude, according to my views multitudes might to recycle the waste material they can learn many thingsthanks offoff they enhance their skills to crate new thing with the help of wastage and also earn money by waste material can make things to sell the market.
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Nowadays,
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waste
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material
becomes
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astrenuous
problem
as well
as rampant all over the world. The section of society does not like to reuse the
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waste
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material
at home. It
is reckoned
that usage of
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material
is a legal requirement that will helpful for multitudes and hashed out
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before
embarking on viewpoints in subsequent 9paragraphs.

To commence with, in
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todays
scenario, individuals like to
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buy
new
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things and
they do not want to recycle the
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old
things that
are wasted
. Such as plastic utensils or other things that
are broken
masses garbage that things which are not degraded and cause air
as well
soil pollution.
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Thus
multitudes have the reuse that
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material
as a craft and to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
the new things that will fruitful at home.
Moreover
, usage of water can
be reused
like when water is
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used
for washing clothes, then
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waste
water can
be collected
in a container and
Make sure that 'use to' is correct. For habitual actions in the past or to mean 'accustomed to', use "used to".
use to
wash toilets and floors and it is an intellectual way to reuse water.

Furthermore
, the
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government
also
should
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make
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some
laws to recycle the
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waste
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material
at a
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house
for the
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people
.
Firstly
disposal things might
be banned
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because
these and not reusable and generate diseases
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because
it is
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non biodegradable
then inhabitants face problems.
Secondly
separate dustbins have been available in the streets that can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for
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waste
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material
that can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
.
For instance
,
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waste
food that will give to the animals
as well
other things that would be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to the poor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

To conclude
, according to my views multitudes might to recycle the
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waste
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material
they can learn
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many
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thingsthanks
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offoff
they enhance their
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skills
to crate new thing with the
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help
of wastage and
also
earn money by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
material
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
things to sell the market.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
16Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to make people recycle more is to make it a legal requirement. v. 9

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
296 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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