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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.17

Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 17
It is true that household waste is increasing at an alarming in a treat, but it is not recycled properly. Although many claimed that government should implement laws to regulate the recycling of everyday waste, I do believe that certain other measures should be taken by the government to tackle this issue effectively. Some countries have imposed a penalty for those houses which are not waste recycling policies. In a country like India, the people are advised to dispose their food waste into separate containers which can be later converted into compost and used for organic farming. Many houses follow this method and waste is managed without any complication, which is widely practiced in many countries. Although such method is justified for some, many who lives in urban areas like flats apartments etc. may not have the provisions of this recycling method due to limited space. In such cases the respective government should shoulder the responsibility of recycling household waste. For example, in that UK, every house is provided with different categories of collection bins at homes. People could discard waste according to the been provided and it will be taken by the recycling team every day and waste is recycled. This makes clear that the government should implement a different method according to the living conditions of people. To conclude, the government should enforce the law to make people responsible for waste which they generate at home. However, the government should also make sure that every home has the facilities to follow it, if not they should provide necessary equipment for discarding household waste so that it can be safely recycled at a separate unit.
It is true that household
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waste
is increasing at an alarming in a treat,
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but
it is not recycled
properly
. Although
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many
claimed that
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government
should implement laws to regulate the
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recycling
of everyday
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waste
, I do believe that certain other measures should
be taken
by the
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government
to tackle this issue
effectively
.

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Some
countries have imposed a penalty for those
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houses
which are not
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waste
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recycling
policies. In a country like India, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are advised
to dispose their food
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waste
into separate containers which can be later converted into compost and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
for organic farming.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
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houses
follow this
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method
and
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waste
is managed
without any complication, which is
widely
practiced in
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many
countries.

Although such
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method
is justified
for
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some
,
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many
who
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lives
in urban areas like flats apartments etc. may not have the provisions of this
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recycling
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method
due to limited space. In such cases the respective
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government
should shoulder the responsibility of
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recycling
household
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waste
.
For example
, in that UK, every
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
is provided
with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
categories of collection bins at homes.
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People
could discard
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waste
according to the
been provided
and it will
be taken
by the
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recycling
team every day and
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waste
is recycled
. This
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makes
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clear
that the
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government
should implement a
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different
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method
according to the living conditions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

To conclude
, the
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government
should enforce the law to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
responsible for
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waste
which they generate at home.
However
, the
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government
should
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that every home has the facilities to follow it, if not they should provide necessary equipment for discarding household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that it can be
safely
recycled at a separate unit.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
25Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. v. 17

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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