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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? v.13

Nowadays, due to the enormous population in the world, the recycling domestic wastes turns to be one of the most important issue which has a significant role in protecting the environment. Some people declare that defining the recycling as a law by the government is the only way to increase the domestic waste resumption. As far as I am concerned, this step could be beneficial, but it would have positive and negative consequences that they will be outlined in the following paragraphs. To begin with, most people try to obey all regulations in the society which are created by the government. When the recycling is defined as a law, they would take that as a necessary requirement and so they recycle more of their waste. Apart from this, the government should provide all facilities that are required for this law such as equipment's recycling process. Secondly, legislating a subject as a legal requirement by the government might have some disadvantages. For instance, the people instinctively would prefer to do whatever they want based on their own choice and freedom, so sometimes forcing them to conform a law can have a reverse result. In fact, trying to make them more aware of the recycling importance by different ways such as TV, media or education could be more efficient than enforcing them by a law. In conclusion, although the resumption as a legal requirement can have both profits and drawbacks, overall, it increases the recycling household waste and so it could be a practical measure to take by the government to tackle the waste problem in the society.
Nowadays, due to the enormous population in the world, the
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recycling
domestic
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wastes
turns to be one of the most
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important
issue which has a significant role in protecting the environment.
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Some
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people
declare that defining the
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recycling
as a
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law
by the
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government
is the
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only
way to increase the domestic
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waste
resumption. As far as I
am concerned
, this step could be beneficial,
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but
it would have
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positive
and
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negative
consequences that they will
be outlined
in the following paragraphs. To
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begin
with, most
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people
try to obey all regulations in the society which
are created
by the
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government
. When the
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recycling
is defined
as a
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law
, they would take that as a necessary requirement and
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so
they recycle more of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
. Apart from this, the
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government
should provide all facilities that
are required
for this
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law
such as equipment's
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recycling
process.
Secondly
, legislating a subject as a legal requirement by the
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government
might have
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some
disadvantages.
For instance
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
instinctively would prefer to do whatever they want based on their
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own
choice and freedom,
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so
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sometimes
forcing them to conform a
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law
can have a reverse result. In fact, trying to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
them more aware of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
importance by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
ways such as TV, media or education could be more efficient than enforcing them by a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
law
.
In conclusion
, although the resumption as a legal requirement can have both profits and drawbacks,
overall
, it increases the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
recycling
household
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it could be a practical measure to take by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
government
to tackle the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
problem in the society.
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IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
266 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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